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同学们，今天我们将通过一封英语书信，向远方的朋友展示我们校园的蜕变。书信不仅是情感传递的桥梁，更是对比时态（一般过去时 vs. 现在完成时）和空间描写（方位词、形容词）的绝佳练习场！
Dear [收信人名], 开头问候 → 主题引入 → 过去校园 → 现在变化 → 个人感受 → 结尾祝福 Love/Yours, [你的名字]
开头暖场: "I hope this letter finds you well. It’s been ages since we last met!"
对比描写: "Our school used to be... But now, you won’t believe your eyes!"
细节升级: "Two shiny teaching buildings have replaced the old, gloomy ones."（教学楼的今昔对比）
| 类别 | 英语表达 | 应用场景 |
|---|---|---|
| 建筑类 | basketball court, library | 描述新增设施 |
| 环境类 | blooming flowers, shady trees | 美化校园环境描写 |
| 情感类 | bursting with pride, thrilled | 表达对变化的感受 |
Dear Emily,
Guess what? Our school has undergone a magical transformation! Five years ago, it was just a small campus with cracked walls and a dusty playground. We even had to share tattered textbooks!
But now, everything sparkles! Two modern teaching buildings stand tall like giants. The new basketball court is always buzzing with laughter after class. What excites me most is the rooftop garden – we grow sunflowers there!
Though studies keep us busy, these changes make every day brighter. Can’t wait to show you around!
Yours,
Lily
"undergone a magical transformation" → "经历了神奇蜕变"
"buzzing with laughter" → "洋溢着欢笑声"
时空穿梭法：用"Three years ago..."和"Nowadays..."自然过渡对比
五感描写：添加"The new library smells like fresh wood and dreams!"（嗅觉+比喻）
数据增信："Our campus expanded from 2 to 5 acres!" 让变化更具体
"Every brick tells a story." 同学们，下次路过校园的新足球场时，不妨用英语记录下草地的触感、进球的欢呼声。记住：最好的作文永远根植于真实的观察与热爱！✨ 现在就开始写属于你们的《校园变形记》吧！
采访一位老师，用英语记录TA眼中的校园变化（口语+写作双提升！）
