“学习=苦+乐?”——初二英语作文高分模板,背完直接写!

学习经验    发布时间:2025-08-29  
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一说英语作文就头疼?尤其老师甩个题目“The Bitter and Happiness of Study”,脑袋瞬间空白。那就不得不给你一套“初二专属”写作套路:3段式结构+万能句型+高分词汇,现场拆给你看。背完这篇,下次考试30分钟直接交卷,还能顺手拿个A!

【结构】
第一段:开场白(2句)
① 背景句:Everyone says study is hard, but I find sweet moments too.
② 中心句:For me, study is a mix of bitter coffee and sweet sugar.

第二段:正文(5句)
③ 苦点1:First, endless homework keeps me up late.
④ 细节:Last Tuesday, I fought with three math papers until midnight.
⑤ 苦点2:Second, exams always give me butterflies.
⑥ 转折点:However, the joy comes when I see my progress.
⑦ 乐点:My English score jumped from 70 to 90, and I felt on top of the world.

第三段:结尾(2句)
⑧ 总结:So, study is bitter, but the happiness is bigger.
⑨ 展望:I will keep going, because every drop of sweat is watering my dream.

【高分替换词】
• hard → tough / exhausting
• happy → over the moon / thrilled
• homework → assignments
• improve → make progress / boost
• dream → goal / future

【万能句型】
1. Not only… but also…
例句:Not only does study give me pressure, but it also gives me pride.
翻译:学习不仅给我压力,也给我骄傲。

2. There is no denying that…
例句:There is no denying that good grades bring me confidence.
翻译:好成绩给我自信,这是毋庸置疑的。

3. The moment…
例句:The moment I solved the hard problem, I wanted to high-five myself.
翻译:解出难题那一刻,我真想给自己击掌。

【现场范文】
The Bitter and Happiness of Study
Everyone says study is tough, but I find sweet moments too. For me, study is a cup of coffee—bitter at first sip, sweet at the aftertaste.

First, endless assignments keep me up late. Last Tuesday, I battled three math papers until midnight; my eyes were red and my brain was fried. Second, exams always give me butterflies. Before the English test, my heart beat like a drum.

However, the joy comes when I see my progress. My English score jumped from 70 to 90; I was over the moon. Not only did my teacher praise me, but my parents also cooked my favorite dish.

So, study is bitter, but the happiness is bigger. I will keep going, because every drop of sweat is watering my future.

【易错提醒】
• 时态:写过去经历用一般过去时(I stayed up…)。
• 连接词:First, Second, However, Finally 让段落清晰。
• 字数:80-100词最佳,别写成长篇小说。

【练习题】
1. 填空:Not only ______ study give me stress, but it ______ gives me joy.(do/does)
2. 翻译:当我看到进步时,所有的苦都值得了。
3. 选择:哪个短语最适合结尾升华?
A. That’s all.  B. Every drop of sweat is watering my dream.
4. 改错:I was very happy when my score improve.(两处)
5. 造句:用“on top of the world”写一句你考高分后的心情。

【答案】
1. does; also
2. When I see my progress, all the bitterness becomes worthwhile.
3. B
4. improved; very → over the moon / really
5. 示例:When I got 95 in math, I felt on top of the world.