夏天嘛,很多同学都喜欢去游泳,但是喜欢游泳,不代表喜欢写《我喜欢游泳》的英语作文。很多同学在写这类“我+动词”作文时,总是卡在怎么开头、怎么展开、怎么收尾。那咱们就来看看写作技巧、常用句型和高频词汇,帮助你在短时间内写出结构完整、语言自然的好作文。只要掌握了这些要点,写作文就像在泳池里划水一样轻松!
一篇六句左右的短文,通常采用以下结构:
开头:点明主题 + 简单引出原因。
主体(2-3句):具体描述你喜欢游泳的原因、频率或经历。
结尾:总结感受或表达希望。
把这三部分记在脑子里,写作时只需要把相应的句子填进去就行。
I like swimming because …(我喜欢游泳,因为…)
I usually swim … times a week.(我通常每周游泳…次。)
Swimming makes me feel …(游泳让我感到…)
When I swim, I can …(当我游泳时,我可以…)
In the future, I hope to …(将来,我希望…)
| 词汇 | 常见搭配 |
|---|---|
| healthy | to stay healthy, good for health |
| relax | to relax, a relaxing activity |
| challenge | a physical challenge, to challenge oneself |
| skill | to improve a skill, swimming skill |
| enjoy | enjoy the water, enjoy the feeling |
I like swimming because it keeps me healthy and helps me relax after a busy school day.
I usually swim three times a week after my afternoon classes.
When I swim, I can feel the cool water washing away all my stress.
Swimming also improves my breathing and strengthens my muscles.
Besides, I enjoy the friendly competition in the school pool.
In the future, I hope to join the swimming team and take part in more competitions.
(译:我喜欢游泳,因为它让我保持健康,并且在忙碌的学习之后帮助我放松。 我通常在下午课后每周游泳三次。 当我游泳时,我能感受到凉爽的水把所有压力冲走。 游泳还能改善我的呼吸,增强我的肌肉。 此外,我还喜欢在学校泳池里友好的竞争。 将来,我希望加入游泳队,参加更多的比赛。)
使用连词把句子连起来,如 because, and, also, besides,可以让文章更流畅。
适当加入情感词(e.g., excited, proud, nervous),让读者感受到你的真实感受。
结尾可以用展望句(e.g., I hope to …)来提升文章层次。
检查动词时态:描述现在的习惯用一般现在时,描述将来愿望用一般将来时。
把下面的中文句子翻译成英文,注意使用上文的句型和词汇。
a. 我喜欢游泳,因为它让我感到很放松。
b. 我每周会去游泳两次。
c. 游泳可以增强我的肺活量。
d. 将来我想参加学校的游泳比赛。
阅读下面的英文短文,找出并用中文解释所有的连接词(如 because, and, besides 等)。I like swimming because it keeps me healthy and helps me relax after a busy school day. I usually swim three times a week. Besides, swimming improves my breathing.
请用上文提供的句型写一篇不少于六句的《我喜欢游泳》作文,尽量加入两条个人经历。
改错:把下面的句子中出现的语法错误全部改正。
a. I likes swimming very much.
b. Swimming make me feel happy.
c. I hope join the swimming team.