Winter and summer are two different seasons. It is bitterly cold in winter. Although we wear sweaters and heavy coats, there are still a lot of fun in winter. We can go skating and skiing in winter. We can get lovely presents and cards at Christmas and enjoy delicious food on New Year's Day. We all look forward to the winter vacation.
Summer is very hot. But we can wear beautiful dresses, skirts and T-shirts. We can go to the beach swimming. We can enjoy ice-cream. Summer is a beautiful season for travelling.
Many people don't like of winter or summer. But I think life would be boring without them.
点评
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重点表达
1．Winter and summer are two different seasons. 冬天和夏天是截然不同的两个季节。
2．Although we wear sweaters and heavy coats, there are still a lot of fun in winter. 虽然我们穿着毛衣和厚厚的外套，冬天依然充满乐趣。
3．We all look forward to the winter vacation. 我们都期盼着寒假。
4．Summer is a beautiful season for travelling. 夏天是出门旅行的好时节。
5．But I think life would be boring without them. 但我想若是没有了它们，生活会变得无趣。