在超市 In a Supermarket
One Sunday morning, I went to a supermarket with my mother. It was a modern and beautiful supermarket. I saw many kinds of goods on the shelves. We could buy what we like. Customers walked here and there with things they bought. I said to my mother, "So many people!" And my mother said, "It is a good place!" We bought a lot of things such as food, clothes and books.
I had a good time in the supermarket.
点评
到超市里买东西是现代生活中一件再普通不过的事情了。因此，很多同学感觉找不到下笔之处，往往是对商店里的东西千篇一律地进行罗列，缺乏新意。本文小作者却用过去时态描述了与妈妈一起去超市购物的经历，不仅体现了超市里商品琳琅满目，人们繁忙购物的场面，而且体现了人们购物时愉快的心情，从另一个侧面表现出了小作者对生活的热爱，是一篇不错的习作。
重点表达
1．many kinds of goods 各种各样的商品
2．We can buy what we like. 我们可以买喜欢的东西。
在家乐福 At Carrefour
On Sunday morning, I went to Carrefour with my mother. I wanted to buy some crisps and five boxes of milk tea. Just as I was choosing crisps, a foreigner stood in front of me. He was a tall, thin, white man. The foreigner and I looked at each other and said 'Hi'. Then he went away. I saw him again when I checked out The shop assistant told him he should pay 38. 5 yuan, but he only paid 38 yuan. The foreigner, however, could not understand her. He only said 'hum' and left the supermarket I wanted to help the shop assistant, but I did not know how to say it in English.
What a Shame!
点评
同一个命题，不同的入笔角度。本文小作者抓小放大，通过描述自己在超市购物时所发生的一件事，让我们感受到他深深的遗憾。小作者并没有细致写出自己的这一感情，却让人感受到其中潜在的含义。要是能多学一点英语的话，就一定能解决这件事，这就是作者想通过此文告诉大家的。学好英语真重要啊！
重点表达
1．with a smile 面带微笑
2．I saw him again when I checked out. 当我拿着薯片去收银台时，我又碰到了他。
3．however 然而