Yang Yang is the daughter of my mother's friend. She is very naughty.
One day, we had a party with my mother's friends. They took their children to my home. Yang Yang came, too. At first, we played toys on the floor of my mother's bedroom. Then, Yang Yang jumped into my mother's rocking chair. She jumped and jumped in the rocking chair. The chair was moved and moved. Suddenly, the rocking chair bumped against the lamp. And the lamp fell down. Everybody was shocked and stopped talking. But Yang Yang was still laughing.
Anyhow, I like to play with Yang Yang.
点评
在这篇文章里,小作者描写了一个可爱又调皮的小女孩洋洋。文章开门见山,点出洋洋调皮的特点,然后描写了一件洋洋典型的调皮捣乱的事件。行文通畅、简练。小作者通过对洋洋动作的描写,好像是一部卡通片一样,形象生动,充满童趣。
重点表达
1.At first, we played toys on the floor of my mother's bedroom. 起先,我们在我妈妈卧室的地板上玩耍。
2.Suddenly, the rocking chair bumped against the lamp. 突然,摇椅撞倒了台灯。
3.Everybody was shocked and stopped talking. 每个人都很震惊,停止了交谈。