Yesterday was my aunt's birthday. I went to shopping with my aunt and my uncle. I bought my aunt a present. The present was a lipstick. My aunt was very happy, because she would like to look beautiful all the time. Then my uncle bought a big birthday cake for my aunt. My aunt liked her birthday presents very much and she took many photos with us at the birthday party.
Happy birthday! My dear aunt!
点评
小作者在这篇文章中对阿姨的生日进行了描述。小作者选择购买礼物来进行描写，语句通顺，整篇文章令人感觉喜气洋洋。我买了礼物，姨父也买了礼物，阿姨很高兴，整个生日聚会气氛热烈。
重点表达
1．I went to shopping with my aunt and my uncle. 我和阿姨、姨父一起去购物。
2．My aunt liked her birthday presents very much and she took many photos with us at the birthday party. 我阿姨很喜欢她的生日礼物，在生日聚会上她拍了许多照片。