老师布置《The Strong Will》作文题,娃咬着笔杆半小时只写出"I am strong"?
别慌!今天教你用「摔跤-爬起-逆袭」三板斧,把作文变成热血漫画!文末还有老师看了直呼内行的范文模板哦~
Fall off the bike (从自行车摔下)
例句:I cried when I fell off the bike
Practice over and over (反复练习)
Wipe tears (擦眼泪) →
Never say die (永不言败)
Like a little warrior (像小战士)
Rainbow after rain (雨后的彩虹)
万能开挂句式:
"At first... Then... Finally..."
(最初...接着...最后...)
学游泳/ 比赛输球/ 上台演讲
哭鼻子 → 咬牙 → 胜利大笑
"No pain, no gain!"
(一分耕耘一分收获)
Last summer, I was as scared as a little mouse in the swimming pool. The water splashed my face and Ichoked three times!
Dad said: "Be brave like Spiderman!" ? I practiced kicking every day. Now I can swim like a happy dolphin! This taught me: "Strong will turns fear into superpower!"
用动物比喻增加趣味(mouse→dolphin)
数字具体化:choked three times
结尾自创英雄宣言
"I very strong, very brave."(中式英语)
"I am strong and brave."
"I not cry."(动词缺失)
"I didn't cry."
"At last I win."(时态错误)
"At last I won!"
把这句话升级成「漫威英雄版」:
"I failed the math test."
"The math test was as hard as climbing Mount Everest! ? I cried under my desk, but then I fought back like Captain America! ? Now numbers are my superpower!"