当英语老师布置这篇作文时,你的表情是不是这样的?? →
"做好事?扶老奶奶过马路?帮同学捡铅笔?这也太老套了吧!"
别慌!看完这篇攻略,让你写出让老师眼前一亮的满分日记!
结构清晰:日期+天气+事件+感受(缺一不可!)
细节到位:至少3个具体动作描写
情感真实:别写"我很开心",要写"为什么开心"
October 12th, Thursday
On my way home, I noticed an elderly lady struggling with heavy grocery bags. Without hesitation, I offered to help carry them...
亮点词汇 | struggling(挣扎) / offered(主动提出) / grateful(感激的) |
高级结构 | "Without hesitation"(毫不犹豫) + 直接引语"Let me help you!" |
"I am very happy today."
"Warmth filled my heart when she smiled at me."
"I help granny."
"I carefully supported her arm while walking."
环境描写:"The setting sun cast golden light on..."(夕阳洒下金光...)
心理活动:"A voice inside me said..."(内心有个声音说...)
升华主题:"This experience taught me that..."(这次经历让我明白...)
假设你在公园遇到迷路的英国游客,请补全日记:
"Seeing the tourist looking at the map ________(困惑地), I ________(主动上前)..."
参考答案:
"Seeing the tourist looking at the map with confusion, I approached him politely..."