Hello! I'm Jasmine. I'm eleven years old. There are three people in my family. They're my father, my mother and I. My father is a teacher. He works very hard. He likes to read newspapers. My mother is a teacher, too. She's good at English. She always prepares for her lessons in the evening. I'm a student. I'm in Class Three Grade Four. I like to sing and I can sing very well. I like to read, too. I have many books. They are very interesting.
We're a happy family.
点评
学生开始英语写作通常都会选择自己熟悉的题材来入手,这篇有关自己家庭的介绍性文章就是很典型的一例。除了通常学生会介绍的家庭成员以外,小作者还介绍了自己的兴趣爱好,和父母的兴趣爱好,使人物的个性在短短的文章中得以呈现。
重点表达
1.She always prepares for her lessons in the evening. 她总是在晚上备课。