每次旅游回来，老师都让写“文明旅游”感想，你是不是只会憋出“Don’t litter”？嘿嘿，咱们这就来一套急救包：从开头惊艳句到结尾升华句，连过渡词都给你配好，直接抄也能拿高分！

1. 结构

Para1 场景描写：时间+地点+心情
Para2 问题+行动：不文明现象→我的做法
Para3 升华：呼吁+展望

2. 开头金句

• The moment our bus entered the West Lake Scenic Area, the air smelled of freedom—and sadly, of fast food boxes too.
  大巴一进西湖景区，空气里都是自由的味道——还有快餐盒的味儿。

• Who would expect a tiny plastic bag to ruin such a perfect sunset?
  谁能想到一个小小的塑料袋就能毁掉一场完美日落？

3. 问题描述：别只会“dirty”

4. 行动描写

• I picked up the cola can, walked ten steps, and dropped it into the recycling bin.
  我捡起可乐罐，走了十步，扔进可回收桶。

• Seeing a kid about to carve his name, I gently handed him a postcard instead.
  看见小孩要刻字，我递给他一张明信片。

5. 结尾升华

If each of us can be a responsible traveler, the world will still be amazed by China’s beauty years from now.
如果我们每个人都能做负责任的游客，多年以后世界仍将为中国之美惊叹。

6. 高分连接词

• 表顺序：First… Then… Finally…

• 表对比：While some tourists…, I decided to…

• 表结果：As a result, the path became clean again.

7. 示范

Last Saturday, our class visited the Great Wall. While some tourists threw wrappers on the ground, I carried a small trash bag and picked up every bottle I saw. When a boy started to scratch the bricks, I told him stories of the Wall’s history and gave him a sticker as a reward for stopping. Small acts, big difference. Let’s travel with our hearts, not just our feet.

小练一下

1. 用“litter scattered everywhere”造一句描写公园。

2. 将“我劝阻了摘花的人”翻译成英文，要求出现“persuade”。

3. 给上面示范文加一个“展望未来”的句子，不少于15词。

参考答案
1. Litter scattered everywhere in the park, ruining its spring charm.
2. I persuaded the man not to pick the flowers by showing him a “No picking” sign.
3. I believe if we start today, tomorrow’s travelers will meet a greener and cleaner Great Wall.