Dad is a policeman. He's tall, strong and clever. He seldom smiles, but I know he loves me very much. One day, when I was doing my homework, my pen was broken. It was late in the evening. I didn't know how to do, because shops were closed then. But Dad said nothing and ran out. After half an hour, he came back with a new pen for me. I was very happy. I know Dad will do everything for me. I love him! When I grow up, I will do everything for him!
点评
在这篇文章里，小作者描写了自己不擅言辞、不擅表达自己感情的父亲。从夜晚买笔这件事，小作者深深地体会到父爱，并且希望等自己长大后能够回报父爱。这充分体现出孩子的感恩之情！小作者从一件小事出发，以小见大。本文是一篇短小精湛的充满了作者真情实感的文章。
重点表达
1．He seldom smiles, but I know he loves me very much. 他很少笑，但是我知道他很爱我。
2．I didn't know how to do, because shops were closed then. 我不知道该怎么办，因为那时商店都关门了。
3．After half an hour, he came back with a new pen for me. 半小时之后，他为我买了一支新钢笔回来。