各位写作时有没有遇到过这种尴尬?明明想强调"非常激动人心",写出来却成了病句!这就是典型的副词赘加错误。就像:so much exciting(错)→ so exciting(对)。
简单说就是:多此一举的副词
错误本质: 用两个同功能的词修饰同一对象
用户案例:
✗ I never knew... could be so much exciting.
✓ I never knew... could be so exciting.
翻译: 我从不知道沿江漂流会这么令人兴奋。
解析:
◆ so 和 much 都是程度副词
◆ 二者不能叠加修饰形容词exciting
| 错误组合 | 正确形式 | 例句对比 |
|---|---|---|
| so + much + 形容词 | so + 形容词 | ✗ This game is so much interesting. ✓ This game is so interesting. |
| very + too + 形容词 | too + 形容词 | ✗ The box is very too heavy. ✓ The box is too heavy. |
| much + very + 形容词 | very + 形容词 | ✗ She was much very happy. ✓ She was very happy. |
| absolutely + completely | 二选一 | ✗ absolutely completely wrong ✓ absolutely wrong |
much不是完全不能用,但只限这些情况:
✓ This book is much more interesting than that one.
✓ He runs much faster after training.
✓ The tea is much too hot to drink.(
✓ It's much too cold for swimming.
除了副词,这些赘余也要警惕:
✗ return back → ✓ return(back赘余)
✗ advance forward → ✓ advance(forward赘余)
✗ repeat again → ✓ repeat(again赘余)
✗ new innovation → ✓ innovation(new赘余)
✗ more better → ✓ better(more赘余)
✗ very perfect → ✓ perfect(very赘余)
修改下列赘余表达:
✗ The movie was very absolutely amazing.
✓ The movie was absolutely amazing.
✗ This problem is much too very difficult.
✓ This problem is much too difficult.
✗ She returned back to her hometown.
✓ She returned to her hometown.
✗ We need to repeat the experiment again.
✓ We need to repeat the experiment.
✗ His answer was completely absolutely wrong.
✓ His answer was completely wrong.
记住黄金法则:一个形容词前只能有一个程度副词! 现在就去检查你的写作吧!