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“A Special Day” 是小学六年级英语作文中很常见的题目。说白了，就是要你写一次特别的一天，可以是生日、旅行、获奖，也可以是一件让你印象深刻的小事。那么，怎么写出一篇内容清楚、句子自然、有亮点的作文呢？
下面这些词汇可以让你的作文更生动，别总是用 "happy" 和 "good"，我们来点丰富点的词！
excited —— 兴奋的
surprised —— 惊喜的
delicious —— 美味的
unforgettable —— 难忘的
together —— 一起
laugh —— 笑
gift —— 礼物
spend —— 度过（时间）
例句参考：
I felt excited when I saw the birthday cake.
当我看到生日蛋糕时，我感到很兴奋。
We spent the whole day together and laughed a lot.
我们整天在一起，笑个不停。
一篇清晰的英语作文最好分为三段，结构清楚，老师一眼看懂你要表达什么。
开头：介绍这一天
用 用1-2句话点出是哪一天、为什么特别。
例： It was my birthday. It was a special day because I had a big party.
中间：描述你做了什么
写清楚你做了什么、和谁在一起、吃了什么、有没有收到礼物或惊喜等等。
提示词： in the morning, in the afternoon, at night, then, after that…
例： In the afternoon, my friends came to my home. We played games and ate a big cake.
结尾：表达感受
最后加一两句，说说这一天对你来说有什么特别的意义。
例： I was so happy. I will never forget this special day.
A Special Day
It was my tenth birthday. I had a big party at home.
In the morning, my mom and dad bought me a big cake. In the afternoon, my friends came to my house. We played games, danced, and laughed a lot. I got many gifts. One of my friends gave me a toy robot. I liked it very much.
We ate cake and drank juice. The cake was so delicious! We took many photos together.
It was a great day. I felt very happy and surprised. I will never forget this special day.
用连接词：比如 then, after that, so, because，可以让句子更流畅。
多用形容词：像 happy, excited, great, fun 这些词，能让内容更有感情。
避免重复：不要一直用“I was happy.” 可以换着说：“I was excited.”、“I had fun.”
“写作文”听起来像一件难事，但其实只要你抓住重点词、清楚结构、加一点地道的表达，就能写出让老师眼前一亮的好文章！
下次碰到 A Special Day 这种题目，不要慌，大胆写出你自己的故事，照着这篇文章的模板来练习，相信你也能写得又流畅又精彩！
