初二年级英语作文的练习，需要注意以下几个方面：
1. 语法和拼写：初二年级英语水平的提升需要掌握基本的语法知识和正确使用拼写规则。在写作练习中，注意检查常见语法和拼写错误，例如动词时态、主谓一致、冠词用法、名词单复数等等。
2. 词汇和表达：积累词汇是提高写作能力的重要部分，在练习中可以多读多背单词，并逐渐扩展自己的词汇量。同时，要注重句型和表达方式的多样性和灵活性，运用不同的修辞手法来丰富文章内容。
3. 组织结构和段落划分：良好的文章组织结构和段落划分可以使文章整体结构更加清晰明了。学生可以尝试在写作中关注开头、主体和结尾，并逐步提高自己的段落划分技巧。
4. 阅读和思维：良好的阅读习惯和思维能力可以帮助学生理解题目要求和文章材料，并将其呈现出来。建议学生阅读大量英文阅读材料，并加强思维训练，例如逻辑思考和分析能力等等。
5. 整体印象：最后，需要注重文章的整体印象和语言的流畅程度。通过多次修改和润色，使文章更加流畅和容易理解，大幅提高文章的可读性和整体印象，以便获得更高的评价得分。
Do you think about you want to be what?If not，let us begin to do that for a while.I think it is important.If I will be a teacher，I won‘t let my students just be a know-nothing school pupil.I can get on well with my students and their parents.Because I will always talk with them about kids‘ study.Will I teach my students to learn to how to get good grades.I must teach them that!I can play basketball with my class students.We can play together.Although it is not enough to be a good teacher，I will tell them my life experience that let them know the biggest trouble is ourselves.We must win ourselves.After that we are the life winner and we are the best in our heart.We should paly apart in letting them improve students'study.
译文：
初二年级英语作文：假如我成为一名老师
你有思考过你以后要做什么?如果没有，那现在开始想一下，我觉得有个梦想很重要的。如果我将来做一名老师，我不会让我的学生成为一个一无所知只知道学习的学生。我会跟我的学生和家长们相处的很好，我会跟他们讨论孩子的学习。我会叫我的学生们怎么样取得好的成绩，如何去学好!我会同他们打篮球。我们会一起玩耍。虽然不足以成为一个好老师，我会告诉他们我的生活经历，让他们知道最大的问题是我们自己。我们必须赢得自己。之后我们才能赢得人生，在我们内心深处自己是最棒的，除了让他们提高成绩之外还应该让他们学会玩，去生活，学习和玩要分开。
单词解析：know-nothing
[英]['nəʊˌnʌθɪŋ][美]['noʊˌnʌθɪŋ]
n.无知者，不可知论者;
adj.无知的，不可知论的;
You know-nothing bookish hypocrite!
你这个一无所知的书呆子伪君子!
This summer, the hottest movie must belong to the Jurassic Park. The series of Jurassic Park is very popular around the world. When I saw the first part, I was very impressed by the dinosaur's world. The director was so talented that he made use of the computer technology to show people an amazing world. The audience could see all kinds of dinosaurs in the movie and learned something about these huge animals. In the movie, people and these big animals can't live together, because human being always wants to hurt them and make the profit. So there is war, the dinosaurs eat people and people try to kill them. It is time for human being to think about what they should do to the nature.
译文：这个夏天，最热门的电影当属于《侏罗纪公园》，这个电影的系列在全世界都很受欢迎。当我看第一部的时候，对恐龙的世界留下了很深刻的印象。导演很聪明，充分利用了电脑技术，给人们展示了一个神奇的世界。观众能够在电影中看到各种各样的恐龙，也学到了关于这些巨大动物的知识。在电影中，人们和这些动物无法共存，因为人类总想要伤害它们，获取利益。因此总是存在战争，恐龙吃人，人想要杀掉恐龙。人类该是时候思考下他们应该对大自然做些什么。
注释：
1.belong to.属于
例句：He did not belong to his set of friends.
他与他那伙朋友不一样.
2.Be impressed by 对...印象深刻
例句：Gorbachev could not help but be impressed by China's successes in international markets.
戈尔巴乔夫也禁不住被中国在世界市场上的成功深深震撼.
3.talented.adj.有才能的，有才干的
例句：He was not only talented but immensely popular with his colleagues.
他不仅才华横溢，而且深受同事的喜爱。
4. make profit 获利，赚钱
例句：They are set to make a big fat profit.
他们下定决心要大赚一笔。
Long long ago, many families had three or four children. They couldn't look after everyone well, so the children must do everything by themselves. They were too poor to go to school. Some of them liked learning, but they had to go to find jobs to make money. Since they were children, they could do lots of difficult things like their parents. Sometimes they even did better than them!
But now, many families have only one child and they regard their child as a pearl. They did everything for the children. Every day, when the child gets up, their parents help him to make the room clean. They also get breakfast ready for their child. When the child is free, they can sleep or do other things, but they needn't do any housework. So many children can't cook; wash their clothes, some don't even know how to clean the floor. That's too bad. In the future, many families will have computers. We can work on the computer instead of going out to do everything. The children also can learn on the computers, so they don't need to move! After a long time, we'll become fatter and fatter. We won't be able to do anything by ourselves!
So, which way is good for us? We must think more.
Every Thursday at 6 o'clock in the afternoon, we all go to the English comer on the campus to practice our spoken English. We talk about various topics we are interested in, such as campus life, the wide use of English, and information technology.
每个星期四下午6点，我们都去校园的英语角练习英语口语。我们谈论各种我们感兴趣的问题，如校园生活，英语的广泛应用以及信息技术等。我们彼此坦率、自由、快乐地交流。
We communicated with each other frankly, happily and freely. Our English has improved quickly by this means. We all believe that "practice makes perfect."
通过这种方式，我们的英语水平提高很快。我们都相信“熟能生巧”。
When the summer comes, the weather is so hot, it is rarely to see the rain. Today, when I wake up, I find the weather is chilly, it is going to rain. I am so happy, I miss the rain so much. Suddenly, the rain drops from the sky, I ran out of the house, looking at the sky, dancing with the rain. I feel so cool, then all my weariness has gone.
当夏天到来的时候，天气很热，很难见到雨。今天，在我起床的时候，我发现天气有点凉，准备下雨了。我很开心，我很想念雨。突然，天下起了雨，我跑出房子，看着天空，与雨共舞。我觉得很凉爽，我所有的倦意都消散了。
Janet is a student of Grade Three. He once was a very active and happy boy. But everything has changed after he was addicted to electronic games. He never plays football with his companions any more. And when he sits in the classroom, he can't pay attention to what teachers say. He sleeps in the classes. And he spends less and less time in studying. As a result, he has fallen behind his class. But he becomes a completely different person after school is over. He stays in the hall of electronic games until it is closed. Ah, he is a strict fan of electronic games. Sometimes his parents can do nothing to stop him. Every morning in the school when we see that he is so weak after a night's "busyworking" , we really feel sad. He is too tired!
One day, when I was washing my hands, my mother came to me and told me that I should not wash my hands with so much water. Until then did I realize that I had the habit of wasting water.In some cities, people even can't not take a shower every day. From then on, I start to save water.
有一天，当我正在洗手的时候，我的妈妈向我走来，她告诉我说不应该用那么多的水洗手。直到那时候，我才意识到我养成了浪费水的习惯。在一些地方，人们甚至还不能够每天洗澡。从那个时候起，我开始节约用水。
词组解析：
was washing：was doing 一般是用于某个具体的过去时间
should not：should 有“理应...”的意思。 should not 的语气很强烈，表示对方做了不该做的事，说“不该..."“不应当...".
Until：prep.到…为止; 在…以前; conj.到…为止，在…以前; 直到…才;
Until直到….为止, not until直到…才
肯定形式表示的意思是"做某事直至某时"，动词必须是延续性的。
否定形式表达的意思是"直至某时才做某事"。动词为延续性或非延续性都可以。
From then on ： 从此; 从那时起; 一般用:“一般将来时;from then on,从那时起,一般用:”一般过去