美丽的公园 A Beautiful Park
There is a park near my house. It is not big, but it is very beautiful. In spring, the grass is green. There are many flowers and butterflies. In summer, the sun shines and some children like to go boating on the lake, others like to swim in the swimming pool. In autumn, the leaves turn yellow. They fall on the ground. The wind blows and blows, we can fly kites in the park. In winter, it snows heavily. A lot of people make snowmen and play snowballs happily. I like the park. It's very interesting.
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本文小作者通过仔细观察，描述了家附近的公园一年四季的变化，以及人们在不同季节的各种活动。小作者运用一般现在时态，非常准确地表达了大自然的规律，一年四季的场景也描写得很有特点。
重点表达
1．In winter，it snows heavily. 在冬天，雪下得很大。
2．play snowballs happily 高兴地打雪仗
3．Some children like to go boating on the lake. Others like to swim in the swimming pool. 一些孩子喜欢在湖里划船，一些孩子在游泳池游泳。
some…others… 一些……另一些