通过对六级写作常见错误分析，我们可以：

1. 了解六级写作评分标准：常见错误如语法、拼写、标点等不仅降低了作文质量，还影响评分标准，而评分标准包括了词汇表达、句式结构和组织结构等方面。因此，通过分析常见错误，可以清晰地了解六级写作的评分标准。

2. 找到自己的薄弱环节：针对学生常犯的错误，例如主谓一致、句子平衡等方面，可以侧重加强相关的语法知识和写作技能，从而针对个人的薄弱环节做出正确的改进。

3. 避免常错单词或短语：通过分析常见语法错误，比如动宾搭配和介词使用等，避免常犯的词汇和短语错误，可以提高作文的整体质量及评分。

4. 培养良好的写作习惯：分析常见错误通常会暴露出没有培养良好的写作习惯使其持续反复出现的原因。 例如，善于记住一些易错点并为之下规定捷径、极力减少赶时写作等，都是确保良好写作习惯的良策。

5. 推动自我进步：多次分析在写作中犯的错误以及常见缺点，并且不断改进下去，可以让我们逐渐地提高写作水平和技能，积攒经验，更高效地完成各项写作任务。

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

Exercise W2

The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.

1. This is a strong topic sentence.

2. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph

describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach. A better topic sentence would be: “Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.”

3. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class. A better topic sentence would be: “For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.”

Exercise W3

These are only examples. Your topic sentences may be different.

1. A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.

2. American telephone books are divided into several sections.

3. The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.

Exercise W4

1. D 2. B 3. D 4. A 5. C

Exercise W5

1. Students who need extra money can hold down a fulltime temporary job during their summer vacation.

2. A person can also meet other people by going to parties.

3. In my opinion, people should write clearly.

Note: The possible correct answers for Exercises W6-W7 are so varied that you might wish to discuss your answers with a fluent English speaker.

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

Exercise W6

These supporting ideas are based on the examples given in the Answer Key for Exercise W1. Yours may be different.

1. Ⅰ. disadvantages of owning a car

A. expensive to buy

B. expensive to maintain

C. difficult to park

D. causing air pollution and traffic jams

2. Ⅰ. reasons for living in a remote area

A. get away from city noise

B. live in unpolluted area

C. remaining where one has been born

D. be closer to nature

3. Ⅰ. disadvantages of studying abroad

A. far from family and friends

B. difficulty in understanding a foreign language

C. more expensive

D. hard to get home in an emergency

4. Ⅰ. kinds of home accidents

A. falls

B. poisoning

C. burns

D. cuts

5. Ⅰ. kinds of airports

A. international

B. national

C. rural

D. private

6. Ⅰ. problems caused by absenteeism

A. lost production

B. missed deadlines

C. mistakes made by substitutes

D. expenses for training substitutes

7. Ⅰ. methods to prepare for taking exams

A. study on a regular basis

B. review appropriate material

C. anticipate questions

D. get good night's sleep the night before

8. Ⅰ. changes brought by computers

A. better telephone services

B. information easier to obtain

C. easier inventory procedures in businesses

D. helpful in education

9. Ⅰ. ways to prepare rice

A. rice with vegetables

B. fried rice

C. curried rice

D. rice salad

10. I. steps to organize a camping trip

A. make a list of necessary items to take

B. get maps of area

C. have car in good condition

D. check weather report

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

Exercise W7

These are only a few examples. Your paragraphs will be different. Have a fluent English speaker check your paragraphs.

1. The disadvantages of owning a car are many. First, they are much more expensive to buy than bikes or motorcycles. After having purchased a car, the owner is then faced with the expense of maintaining it. Also, it is frequently hard to find a parking place for a car. Last but not least, the increasing number of cars will lead to more serious air pollution and traffic jams, especially in large cities.

2. The reasons a person lives in a remote area may be one of the following. Cities are usually very noisy, and a person may want to get away from the noise. Another attraction of a remote area might be that it is unpolluted. If a person was born and raised in a remote area, he or she may want to remain in the place that is best known. Finally, some people like to be closer to nature, and this is easier away from a city.

3. Before applying to a foreign university, one should consider these disadvantages of studying abroad. First, a student may feel alone by being far from family and friends. Also, difficulty in understanding a foreign language can be very frustrating and can affect the student's grades. It can be very expensive to pay the costs of travel and housing in a different country. Finally, if here is an emergency at home, it is hard to get home in a hurry.

4. Although a person thinks it is safe at home, many different kinds of accidents occur there. Falls are perhaps the most common accident among both young children and older adults. Poisoning is a danger, especially if an adult leaves medicines or cleaning chemicals within the reach of a small child. Burns frequently occur in the kitchen area during meal preparation. Finally, people cut themselves when using kitchen knives, trimming equipment in the yard, and power tools in the workshop or garage.

5. There are several kinds of airports. From an international airport, flights go to other countries as well as to cities in the same country. A national airport usually only serves the cities within its nation. Rural airports usually link a town with a nearby national airport. Private airports are those on a military base or a hospital. Individuals and companies can own their own private airports.

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

段落的衔接

1. 1) First, Second, Instead, Third, In contrast, Fourth, Consequently, Finally, But

2) Although, First of all, Furthermore, Once, Second, Sometimes, At other times, Finally, Then

2. for, so, but, and, and, and, however, but, and

3. Television was invented by John Logie Baird. When he was young he built an aeroplane. He tried to fly in it, but it crashed down below. However, Baird was fortunate not to be killed. It did not discourage him. Instead, when he was older he tried to make diamonds from coal. The only result was an enormous explosion. Yet he was not injured. Then, he became a businessman. When his business failed, he thought of working at television. His family advised him not to, but he did not listen to them. He rented an attic, bought the apparatus he needed and started working. Although he worked for a long time, he was not successful. One day he saw a picture on his screen. So he rushed out to get someone he could “televise”. He found an office boy and took him back to his room. However, no image of the boy appeared on his screen. The boy, terrified, had put his head down. When he put it up again, his picture appeared on the screen. That's how television had been discovered.

4. In the United Stated there is a belief that people are rewarded for working, producing, and achieving. Many people believe that there is equality of opportunity that allows anyone to become successful. This belief is illustrated by stories written by a nineteenth-century American novelist, Horatio Alger, who wrote about the “American Dream”. In his stories he described poor people who became rich because of their hard work, honesty, and luck. The stories reinforced the idea that all individuals, no matter how poor, were capable of becoming wealthy as long as they were honest and hard-working. For many Americans, however, Horatio Alger's “rags-to-riches” stories do not represent the reality of opportunity. Many poor immigrants who came to the United States in the nineteenth and twentieth centuries were able to become rich. Today, however, the poor generally do not rise to the middle and upper classes. That is why the “American Dream” is now described as a myth.

5. There were once a dog and a cat sitting by a kitchen door when the cook came out and threw several pieces of meat to them. They both sprang to get the meat, but the dog was the stronger. He ate it all himself. This was selfishness, by which I mean that the dog cared only for himself. Was this wrong? No, the dog knew no better. But men are different from dogs and follow a different rule of conduct. How miserable we should all be if every person were to care only for himself! We ought to be thankful that we have a higher nature than that of beasts and are able to see and feel the duty of being kind and affectionate to one another. And as we can see and feel this duty, we ought to be very careful always to observe it.

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

Exercise W2

The following topic sentences are only examples. Your sentences may be different.

1. This is a strong topic sentence.

2. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph

describes what the writer does when he or she goes to the beach. A better topic sentence would be: “Whenever I have the opportunity to go to the beach, I always follow the same routine.”

3. This is a weak topic sentence because the rest of the paragraph describes the various ways students can get to class. A better topic sentence would be: “For the many students who cannot afford a car, there are several alternative ways of getting to class.”

Exercise W3

These are only examples. Your topic sentences may be different.

1. A dormitory room is cold and impersonal until several changes have been made to make it more inviting.

2. American telephone books are divided into several sections.

3. The fast-food restaurant has become popular for various reasons.

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

标点符号用法讲练

EXERCISE 1

1. The…identity: Lt, Henry Bedell, Company D, 11th Vermont Volunteers…old.

2. It…that Dad…already-farming 80 acres…job.

3. Now I'm…point-but what …there?

4. Rain, snow, sleet, fog…world.

5. During…tourists; during the winter…beach.

6. To…extent, mankind…earth.

7. Like…wild life,…reproduce, grow…fall.

8. The…Jim Thorpe, the greatest American…times.

9. The…enormous, juicy…appetizing.

10. I…kids-educated…the West…movies-would be disappointed.

11. I…statue. Its soul, so to speak, is…beauty.

12. The…students, teachers, doctors, businessmen, factory workers-people…life.

13. Is…underground-in new…caves?

14. I…-by correspondence-that I…her at Beijing Hotel…Thursday.

15. Passengers…beverages: coffee, tea, milk or soda.

16. Present…Mr. Ho, Chairman…English Department; Mr. Brown, a visiting…Denmark; and…us.

17. The…patients; it…of “defensive medicine”.

18. His…with them-he had…once made…help.

EXERCISE 2

1….work, for…

2….down; as a result, we…

3….note; it…

4….watch, yet…

5…..tired, so…

6. …booming; consequently, the company…

7. …in it, and it was…

8. … looking; the food, however, is…

9….compulsory; the students… choice, therefore

10…coffee; others…

11…costly; nevertheless, we…

12…weightlessness; moreover, they…

EXERCISE 3

1. … death; …

2. …sunlight. We…/…sunlight; we…

3. …May, yet/but snow…

4. …years; for example, …

5. …quiet; …

6. …night; I…/….night, and/so I…

7. …punished; in fact…/…punished. In fact…

8. …food, and so…./food; therefore, I….

9. …very; what…./…vary. What…

10. …TV; Marie…/…TV, and Marie…

EXERCISE 4

1. “On Friday,” the teacher announced, “we'll take up a new lesson.”

2. “ What,” he asked, “do we have to prepare for the camping trip?”

3. C

4. He greets everyone with “Hi!”

5. “You may think I have a lot of garbage in these bags,” one shopping-bag lady volunteered in a church soup kitchen, “but it's everything I need.”

6. C

7. “It pains me,” I said, “to find that you both have been panhandling so long that it no longer embarrasses you.”

8. Retirement often brings many problems surrounding the “What do I do with myself?” question, even though there may be no financial worries.

EXERCISE 5

1. At one o'clock on September 2, 1666, the Great Fire of London started inside a baker's shop in Pudding Lane. It lasted five days, and nearly 80% of all the buildings within the London Wall were razed. According to the official report, 13,200 houses, 87 parish churches, over 400 streets, and the enormous old St. Paul's Cathedral-one of the wonders of the medieval world-were in ruins. Out of London's 450 acres, only 75 remained untouched.

Robert Hubert, a French watchmaker from Rouen, was accused of the fire. The sentence said he “had deliberately started the fire”. After he was hanged, it was conclusively proved that he had not even arrived in London until two days after the fire broke out.

2. Mr. Jones was very fond of climbing mountains, so one year he went to Switzerland for his holidays. After he had climbed some easy mountains, he decided one day to climb a more difficult one; but he did not want to go up it alone, so he found a good Swiss guide, who had often climbed that mountain.

At first it was not a difficult climb, but then they came to a place which was not so easy. The guide stopped, turned round and warned Mr Jones. “Be careful here,”he said “This is a dangerous place. You can easily fall, and if you do, you will fall straight down a very long way.” “But,”he continued calmly, “if you do fall here, don't forget to look to the right while you are going down. There is a quite extraordinarily beautiful view there-much more be

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

句型写作练习

(一)并列句

1) It was a cold snowy day and he had no money left for food.

2) Hurry up or you'll be late.

3) It rained heavily last night but I went to the show anyway.

4) I enjoy classical music, so does she.

5) He must be ill, for he is absent today.

6) Some people waste food while others haven't enough.

7) She is fat whereas her husband is thin.

8) She cannot read, neither can she write.

(二)复合句

1.

1) It is quite obvious that they need more help in English.

2) It is good news that she is still alive.

3) It doesn't seem likely that she will come here.

4) What the children like the best in the zoo are the pandas.

5) What we are badly in need of is raw material.

2.

1) It's a pity that he did not come earlier.

2) It is a well-known fact that smoking can cause lung cancer.

3) It is true that I encouraged him, but I didn't actually help him.

4) It didn't seem likely that they would ever keep their promise.

5) It was hard to understand why Prof. Hardy had singled out Mary for criticism.

3.

1) Can you tell me what kind of show they are putting on?

2) I'm wondering if the letter is overweight.

3) I am thinking how we can improve our study habits.

4) We are still uncertain whether Henry is the right person for the job.

5) Peter has always been in good health except that he has a slight headache sometimes.

6) He suddenly remembered that he had forgotten to take his notebook with him.

4.

1) I always took it for granted that I was far more intelligent than he was.

2) We all thought it a pity that you were unable to attend our meeting.

3) We consider it important that you should mind your manners.

4) He didn't want it known that he was too ill to go on working.

5) I regard it important that every one of you should finish your homework on time.

6) He took it for granted that his father would come to his help if he got into trouble.

7) We thought it highly probable that he might change his mind at the last minute.

8) I think it likely that the train will be delayed by the dense fog.

9) The doctor thinks it advisable that you should stop smoking.

5.

1) Could you show me what you have written?

2) This is what we should always keep in mind.

3) What they saw in China made a deep impression on them.

4) We must not put off till tomorrow what we can do today.

6.

1) Nothing could hide the fact that he is growing old.

2) The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader.

3) I have a complacent feeling that I'm highly intelligent.

4) The explanation that he didn't see the notice is unsatisfactory./ The explanation is unsatisfactory that he didn't see the notice.

5) Most of us don't agree with his view that there is no advantage in introducing the new method.

6) The news soon spread throughout the country that he won the first gold medal at the 23rd Olympic Games.

7) His suggestion that intelligence is a relative matter is not universally accepted./His suggestion is not universally accepted that intelligence is a relative matter.

8) He seconded my motion that the vote be postponed.

9) The fear that he might not be able to finish the work disturbed him greatly./ The fear disturbed him greatly that he might not be able to finish the work.

10) We expressed a hope that Mr. and Mrs. Morrison would come and visit China again.

11) I've come from Mr. Lin with a message that he won't be able to see you this afternoon.

12) There can be no doubt that Suzy is the right person for the job.

大学英语六级写作常见错误分析

语法错误

(一)句子结构错误

1. 主从句叠置

1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use the computer.

2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.

2. 简单句叠置

I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.

3. 从句叠置

It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life.

4. 句子成分缺失

If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.

5. 语序错误

1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?

1) I often wonder where they have got their money.

(二)动词形式错误

1.时态错误

Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future.

2.语态形式错误

1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.

2) Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.

3.单复数形式错误

1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.

2) Some people are afraid that computers may control men in the future.

4.非谓语动词形式错误

1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf of everyone.

2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for one's health.

3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.

(三)代词错误

1) We can use computers in doing everything we like.

2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.

(四)冠词错误

1) A/The horse is a useful animal.

2) The exam will be held in December, 2004.

(五)词性错误

1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.

2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.