1. 拼写错误：包括单词的错拼，主谓不一致以及使用了错误的时态等。
2. 句子表达不清：句子结构松散，逻辑关系混乱或过分复杂，使得读者难以理解文章的主旨。
3. 语法错误：包括名词性和动词性错误，如缺少主、谓或宾语，误用代词，短语顺序不当等。
4. 内容不够充分：文章内容过于肤浅，无法从题目的角度深入探讨，并缺乏针对该题目的有说服力的分析与总结。
5. 不准确的词汇：使用词汇不够准确或不当，或使用具有强烈色彩的修辞手法不适当，导致文章表达不清或语意混淆。
6. 文字组织混乱：文章段落结构混乱，没有明确标记主题句或违背基本章节结构原则，不能为读者提供清晰的框架。
7. 语气不够客观：文章语气过分主观，并自我表达过多情感色彩，有时会使文章降低理性的权威性和说服力。
语法错误
(一)句子结构错误
1. 主从句叠置
1) There are more and more students who like to use the computer. / More and more students like to use the computer.
2) There are still many problems that should be noted and resolved. / Many problems still should be noted and resolved.
2. 简单句叠置
I like chatting on line very much, so I go to the net bar almost every weekend. / I like chatting on line very much. I go to the net bar almost every weekend.
3. 从句叠置
It is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life. / As is known to all, computers play an important role in many fields of our life.
4. 句子成分缺失
If we work hard, we will surely be successful. /Working hard, we will surely be successful.
5. 语序错误
1) Why do college students spend more and more time on the computer?
1) I often wonder where they have got their money.
(二)动词形式错误
1.时态错误
Many people think that the Internet will be more useful in the future.
2.语态形式错误
1) I have been excited several days at the news that you will come here.
2) Most of the students are satisfied with the service in the dining hall.
3.单复数形式错误
1) Wise men seek opportunities rather than wait for them. / A wise man seeks opportunities rather than wait for them.
2) Some people are afraid that computers may control men in the future.
4.非谓语动词形式错误
1) Let me say “hello” to you on behalf of everyone.
2) Doing exercise in the morning is good for one's health.
3) Having studied in our school for 3 years, I find that the canteen service has changed a lot.
(三)代词错误
1) We can use computers in doing everything we like.
2) A college student should be able to do his washing on his own.
(四)冠词错误
1) A/The horse is a useful animal.
2) The exam will be held in December, 2004.
(五)词性错误
1) I wish you can consider my suggestions.
2) If a person wants to succeed, he must learn to endure sufferings and setbacks.
用词错误
1) Students must know how to operate a computer. / Students must know how to work on a computer.
2) People can be exposed to many new things on the Internet. / People can learn many new things on the Internet.
3) The purpose of this letter is to express some opinions on the service in the dining hall. / The purpose of this letter is to make some complaints about the service in the dining hall.
表达习惯错误
1) What generated so large a change? / Why is there so large a change?
2) Now 6000 yuan is enough for you to buy a P4 computer. / Now you can buy a P4 computer for 6000 yuan.
3) In a room often live 6-8 students.
4) I think there are three reasons for this great change.
5) The prices of the food are too high. / The food is too expensive.
6) The reason for this is that some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard. / This is because some people want to earn plenty of money without working hard.
标点符号及大小写错误
1) However, every coin has two sides. I think the surroundings in our canteen are the best among all universities.
2) The man was racing down the street because he was late for the class.
3) At last I want to let you know that I love our university very much.
4) My favorite sports are swimming, jogging, mountaineering and playing table tennis.
5) The best English film in my eyes is Forrest Gump.
冠词用法讲练
EXERCISE 1
A. 1. a 2. an
3. an 4. an
5. an 6. an
7. a 8. an
B. 1. a new office building 2. travel agent
3. an American scientist 4. a day's outing
5. an Indian stamp 6. a heart attack
7. an advanced country 8. an interesting play
EXERCISE 2
1. A (telephone); a 2.x; x; x
3. a; a; an; a 4.a; a; a; an
5. a; a; a; a; a 6.an; a; x; an; x; a; a
7. a; an 8.x
EXERCISE 3
A. 1. a (very bad night); a (wink)
2. an (honesty)
3. a (vision of a new and happier Europe)
4. a (holiday); a (day off); a (month)
5. an (hourly service)
6. a (great honour); a (gathering)
7. a (mountain); a (horror)
8. an (early age)
9. a (word)
10.a (boy)
B. 1. a (big problem); (not too big) a (problem)
2. a (square nose); (so handsome) a (man)
3. (However great) a (disaster)
4. (Many) a (shipwrecked sailor)
5. (Such) an (urgent need)
6. (So urgent) a (need)
7. (as lovely)a (picture)
8. (what) a (serious crisis)
9. (many) a (greater man)
10. (How serious) a (crime)
EXERCISE 4
1. the; x 2. x; The(forests)
3. x; The(nature) 4. The (education); x
7. x; the 8. the; x
EXERCISE 5
A. 1.x; a; the 2. The (steam-engine); the
3. The (bat); a 4. x; the; x; a
5. the 6. a; the; x; x
7. The(prison);a 8. The (youngest); x; the; x
B. 1.The (horse); a (noble animal); a (faithful servant)
2. a (game)
3. the (school); the (behaviour);the (pupils)
4. The (dinner); the (speeches)
5. the (setting of goals)
6. the (hospital); (at) the (end of)t he (week)
7. the (radio)
8. The (flute)
9. (have) a; the (city center); (get) a; (on) the (bus)
10. the (ground); the (wood)
EXERCISE 6
A. 1.The; the; the 2. The; the
3. The; the 4. The (wool); the
5. x; the; x 6. the; the; the; x
7. the; the 8. x; x; x
9. the; the 10. x
B. 1. the British Museum 2. the Suez Canal
3. the difference between 4. the Wilsons
these two words
5. in the first row 6. the year 1949
EXERCISE 7
(The) People everywhere … When (the) strangers … (The) Good manners … in (the) different parts … accepting (the) gifts … shows (the) bad manners … even (the) rudeness … with (the) good manners accept (the) important things with (the) both hands …to accept (the) important things shows not only (the) discourtesy … In (the) Europe and (the) North America, however, (the) people…
标点符号用法讲练
EXERCISE 1
1. The…identity: Lt, Henry Bedell, Company D, 11th Vermont Volunteers…old.
2. It…that Dad…already-farming 80 acres…job.
3. Now I'm…point-but what …there?
4. Rain, snow, sleet, fog…world.
5. During…tourists; during the winter…beach.
6. To…extent, mankind…earth.
7. Like…wild life,…reproduce, grow…fall.
8. The…Jim Thorpe, the greatest American…times.
9. The…enormous, juicy…appetizing.
10. I…kids-educated…the West…movies-would be disappointed.
11. I…statue. Its soul, so to speak, is…beauty.
12. The…students, teachers, doctors, businessmen, factory workers-people…life.
13. Is…underground-in new…caves?
14. I…-by correspondence-that I…her at Beijing Hotel…Thursday.
15. Passengers…beverages: coffee, tea, milk or soda.
16. Present…Mr. Ho, Chairman…English Department; Mr. Brown, a visiting…Denmark; and…us.
17. The…patients; it…of “defensive medicine”.
18. His…with them-he had…once made…help.
EXERCISE 2
1….work, for…
2….down; as a result, we…
3….note; it…
4….watch, yet…
5…..tired, so…
6. …booming; consequently, the company…
7. …in it, and it was…
8. … looking; the food, however, is…
9….compulsory; the students… choice, therefore
10…coffee; others…
11…costly; nevertheless, we…
12…weightlessness; moreover, they…
EXERCISE 3
1. … death; …
2. …sunlight. We…/…sunlight; we…
3. …May, yet/but snow…
4. …years; for example, …
5. …quiet; …
6. …night; I…/….night, and/so I…
7. …punished; in fact…/…punished. In fact…
8. …food, and so…./food; therefore, I….
9. …very; what…./…vary. What…
10. …TV; Marie…/…TV, and Marie…
EXERCISE 4
1. “On Friday,” the teacher announced, “we'll take up a new lesson.”
2. “ What,” he asked, “do we have to prepare for the camping trip?”
3. C
4. He greets everyone with “Hi!”
5. “You may think I have a lot of garbage in these bags,” one shopping-bag lady volunteered in a church soup kitchen, “but it's everything I need.”
6. C
7. “It pains me,” I said, “to find that you both have been panhandling so long that it no longer embarrasses you.”
8. Retirement often brings many problems surrounding the “What do I do with myself?” question, even though there may be no financial worries.
EXERCISE 5
1. At one o'clock on September 2, 1666, the Great Fire of London started inside a baker's shop in Pudding Lane. It lasted five days, and nearly 80% of all the buildings within the London Wall were razed. According to the official report, 13,200 houses, 87 parish churches, over 400 streets, and the enormous old St. Paul's Cathedral-one of the wonders of the medieval world-were in ruins. Out of London's 450 acres, only 75 remained untouched.
Robert Hubert, a French watchmaker from Rouen, was accused of the fire. The sentence said he “had deliberately started the fire”. After he was hanged, it was conclusively proved that he had not even arrived in London until two days after the fire broke out.
2. Mr. Jones was very fond of climbing mountains, so one year he went to Switzerland for his holidays. After he had climbed some easy mountains, he decided one day to climb a more difficult one; but he did not wnt to go up it alone, so he found a good Swiss guide, who had often climbed that mountain.
At first it was not a difficult climb, but then they came to a place which was not so easy. The guide stopped, turned round and warned Mr Jones. “Be careful here,”he said “This is a dangerous place. You can easily fall, and if you do, you will fall straight down a very long way.” “But,”he continued calmly, “if you do fall here, don't forget to look to the right while you are going down. There is a quite extraordinarily beautiful view there-much more bea
句型写作练习
(一)并列句
1) It was a cold snowy day and he had no money left for food.
2) Hurry up or you'll be late.
3) It rained heavily last night but I went to the show anyway.
4) I enjoy classical music, so does she.
5) He must be ill, for he is absent today.
6) Some people waste food while others haven't enough.
7) She is fat whereas her husband is thin.
8) She cannot read, neither can she write.
(二)复合句
1.
1) It is quite obvious that they need more help in English.
2) It is good news that she is still alive.
3) It doesn't seem likely that she will come here.
4) What the children like the best in the zoo are the pandas.
5) What we are badly in need of is raw material.
2.
1) It's a pity that he did not come earlier.
2) It is a well-known fact that smoking can cause lung cancer.
3) It is true that I encouraged him, but I didn't actually help him.
4) It didn't seem likely that they would ever keep their promise.
5) It was hard to understand why Prof. Hardy had singled out Mary for criticism.
3.
1) Can you tell me what kind of show they are putting on?
2) I'm wondering if the letter is overweight.
3) I am thinking how we can improve our study habits.
4) We are still uncertain whether Henry is the right person for the job.
5) Peter has always been in good health except that he has a slight headache sometimes.
6) He suddenly remembered that he had forgotten to take his notebook with him.
4.
1) I always took it for granted that I was far more intelligent than he was.
2) We all thought it a pity that you were unable to attend our meeting.
3) We consider it important that you should mind your manners.
4) He didn't want it known that he was too ill to go on working.
5) I regard it important that every one of you should finish your homework on time.
6) He took it for granted that his father would come to his help if he got into trouble.
7) We thought it highly probable that he might change his mind at the last minute.
8) I think it likely that the train will be delayed by the dense fog.
9) The doctor thinks it advisable that you should stop smoking.
5.
1) Could you show me what you have written?
2) This is what we should always keep in mind.
3) What they saw in China made a deep impression on them.
4) We must not put off till tomorrow what we can do today.
6.
1) Nothing could hide the fact that he is growing old.
2) The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader.
3) I have a complacent feeling that I'm highly intelligent.
4) The explanation that he didn't see the notice is unsatisfactory./ The explanation is unsatisfactory that he didn't see the notice.
5) Most of us don't agree with his view that there is no advantage in introducing the new method.
6) The news soon spread throughout the country that he won the first gold medal at the 23rd Olympic Games.
7) His suggestion that intelligence is a relative matter is not universally accepted./His suggestion is not universally accepted that intelligence is a relative matter.
8) He seconded my motion that the vote be postponed.
9) The fear that he might not be able to finish the work disturbed him greatly./ The fear disturbed him greatly that he might not be able to finish the work.
10) We expressed a hope that Mr. and Mrs. Morrison would come and visit China again.
11) I've come from Mr. Lin with a message that he won't be able to see you this afternoon.
12) There can be no doubt that Suzy is the right person for the job.