好习惯可以帮助大学生变得更加优秀,比如勤奋学习能够提升学生成绩,认真听讲能够提高知识储备,合理安排时间能够有效利用时间提高效率,经常锻炼可以增强体质和减轻压力。这些好习惯能够培养大学生的自律意识、思维能力和身体素质,同时也能够为将来的就业和创业打下坚实的基础。
坏习惯则会阻碍大学生的健康成长,导致大学生在学习和生活中面临各种困难和挑战。比如旷课和迟到会影响学习效果和录取考核,赖床和熬夜会导致身体疲劳和学习效率低下,玩手机和聊天会分散注意力和影响同学间的交流,饮酒和吸烟会影响身体健康和社交关系。这些坏习惯会破坏大学生的学习和生活秩序,使大学生无法在学校和社会中获得成功。
大学生不健康的生活习惯 Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Unhealthy Habits of College Students. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1.部分大学生有不健康的生活习惯,例如:晚睡、过度消费、沉溺游戏。。。。
2.这种不健康生活习惯的危害
3.如何纠正
写作思路依然是上课反复强调的功能段落的写作思路:首段为负面现象描述(即提出问题),二段为问题分析(危害),尾段为建议措施。
It can be noticed that there are some unhealthy living habits among young people, especially college students. Typical examples include staying up late, being addicted to games, consuming in an inappropriate way. Thus, due attention should be paid to students' daily habits.
可以注意到,年轻人,尤其是大学生,有一些不健康的生活习惯。典型的现象包括熬夜、沉迷游戏、以不恰当的方式消费。因此,应适当注意学生的日常习惯。
Apparently, these bad habits may generate negative impacts. To begin with, they may impair students' physical health and psychological fitness. In addition, what worries many teachers is that they may also exert negative influences on students' academic performance. To conclude, never can we turn a blind eye to these phenomena.
显然,这些坏习惯可能会产生负面影响。首先,它们可能会损害学生的身体健康和心理健康。此外,令许多教师担忧的是,他们也可能对学生的学习成绩产生负面影响。总之,我们决不能对这些现象视而不见。
In view of the seriousness of this issue, it is time that we took effective measure. Firstly, it is suggested that universities or colleges should cultivate students' awareness of healthy living. Secondly, students themselves are well-advised to learn to regulate and control their own life appropriately. Only by doing so, can we hope to see the ideal scenes in which students enjoy their colorful and healthy life in Ivory Tower.
鉴于这个问题的严重性,现在是我们采取有效措施的时候了。首先,建议高校应培养学生的健康生活意识。其次,建议学生自己学会适当地调节和控制自己的生活。只有这样,我们才能看到学生们在象牙塔享受丰富多彩、健康生活的理想场景。
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范文参考:
Certainly, every person has bad habits. Some people may be in the habit of speaking rudely; some tend to be deaf to others' opinions; some are inclined to delay. However, there is no doubt that allowing to be controlled by bad habits does a great harm to personal development.
当然,每个人都有坏习惯。有些人可能有说话粗鲁的习惯;有些人往往对别人的意见充耳不闻;有些人倾向于拖延。然而,毫无疑问,任由坏习惯控制对个人发展有很大危害。
It is not too much to say that it is a destructive behavior to allow to be controlled by bad habits while it is constructive to change unwanted habits. If bad habits are allowed to be developed, they will get out of control and become big obstacles to life or career. For example, a delayed-prone person will hardly restrain himself from missing the deadline. Understandably, he will have few chances to be entrusted with important tasks and then will barely be professionally experienced enough to gain promotion. On the contrary, it is beneficial to change unwanted habits and acquire good ones, because good habits can make people more competent and thus widen the door to success.
可以毫不夸张地说,允许被坏习惯控制是一种破坏性行为,而改变不想要的习惯才是有建设性的。如果任由坏习惯养成,它们就会失控,成为生活或事业的巨大障碍。例如,一个容易拖延的人很难抑制自己错过最后期限。可以想象到,他将很少有机会被委以重任,然后几乎没有足够的专业经验来获得晋升。相反,改变不想要的习惯并获得好的习惯是有益的,因为好的习惯可以让人更有能力,从而打开成功的大门。
In summary, bad habits will probably make it impossible for us to achieve our ambitions. Therefore, we should be alert to our bad habits and make persistent efforts to break them.
总之,坏习惯可能会使我们无法实现自己的抱负。因此,我们应该警惕我们的坏习惯,并坚持不懈地努力打破它们。
写作思路:
开篇指出虽然每个人都有坏习惯,但是放任坏习惯对于个人发展十分不利。第二段继续论证放任坏习惯对生活及事业的危害以及改正坏习惯的必要性,且举例说明。结尾进行总结,强调主题。
亮点表达:
1.be in the habit of doing sth. 有做某事的习惯,或习惯做某事
2.be deaf to sth. 对某事充耳不闻
3.be inclined to do sth. 同义于tend to do sth. 有做某事的倾向,也就是习惯做某事
4.there is no doubt that+句子 毫无疑问的是
5.It is not too much to say that+句子 毫不夸张的是
6.destructive 破坏性的;constructive 建设性的
7.restrain sb. from doing sth. 约束某人做某事
8.be alert to sth. 警惕某事
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Habit of Smoking with reference to the picture given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Write your essay on Answer Sheet 1.
【参考范文】 The Habit of Smoking
In the picture, cigarettes were put together to form a phrase "THE END", which vividly implies the habit of smoking does a great harm to people's happy life. Smoking poses a potential danger to both the smokers themselves and the non-smokers who breathe in the secondhand smoke, which is even more harmful.
China has a large smoker population. To make things worse, the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis. Some people, especially youngsters, pick up smoking because they think it's cool. Meanwhile,many others regard smoking cigarettes as a way to release pressure or an important lubricant in the social relationship. The sad thing about all this is that many people, knowing smoking is a bad habit, still hold on to it.
Currently, perhaps it is not easy to ban the tobacco industry, but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places, making it more and more difficult and inconvenient for smokers to smoke and at the same time. ensuring peoole who do not smoke to have fresh air to breathe.
【参考译文】 吸烟的习惯
在图片中,一些香烟被拼成了一个英语短语“结束”,这生动地暗示了吸烟会严重危害人们的幸福生活。吸烟不仅对于吸烟者本身很危险,对吸二手烟的不吸烟者也是如此,而且二手烟的危害更大。中国的烟民数量十分庞大,更糟糕的是,吸烟的人数每天都在攀升。一些人(尤其是青少年)开始吸烟是因为他们觉得吸烟很酷。与此同时,还有很多人认为吸烟是一种缓解压力的方式,也是社会关系中重要的润滑剂。这一切所导致的结果就是许多人即使知道吸烟是一种不好的习惯,也仍然不肯戒烟。
目前看来,取缔整个烟草行业可能并非易事,但是我们可以执行在公共场合禁止吸烟的政策。这样,既可以使烟民吸烟更加困难和不便,又可以保证不吸烟的人能够呼吸到新鲜的空气。
【要点用法】
cigarette香烟 lubricant润滑剂
imply暗示 hold on to坚持,不放弃
do a great harm to…严重危害……enforce执行
secondhand smoke二手烟 ensure确保
【句法点评】
1.In the picture,cigarettes were put together to form a phrase“THE END”,which vividly impfies the habit of smoking does a great harm to people's happy life.
首句直入主题,介绍图画内容,被动句与非限制性定语从句相结合,句式灵活。
2.To make things worse,the people who smoke have been on the rise on a daily basis.
tomakethingsworse意为“使事情更糟糕的是……”。beonthe rise意为“在逐渐增加、上升”。on adaily basis意为“每天”,可用于替换常用表达everyday。这三个短语都是非常地道的表达方式,值得积累。
3.Tbe sad thing about all this is that many people,knowing smoking is a bad habit,still hold on to it.that引导表语从句,其中的knowing smoking is a bad habit是现在分词短语作让步状语,也是插入语。hold onto意为“坚持,不放弃”,等同于stickto。
4.…but it is possible to enforce the no-smoking policy in all public places.making it more and more difficult…and at the same time.ensuring people who do not smoke…to enforce a policy为固定搭配,意为“推行某一政策”,making…和ensuring…为并列结构,均为现在分词短语作结果状语。在描述问题之后提出现实的解决方案,使文章更具深度。
The Advantages of Saving Money
省钱的好处
Everyone must work to live, but many people are fortunate enough to make more money than they immediately need. What should they do with this extra income? While it is tempting for people to spend it all on things they desire, I believe it is better to save at least a portion of the extra income for the future.
每个人都必须工作才能生活,但许多人足够幸运,能赚到比他们现在需要的更多的钱。他们该如何处理这笔额外收入?虽然人们很容易把所有的钱都花在他们想要的东西上,但我认为最好把至少一部分额外收入存起来用于未来。
By saving money, people give themselves more security. They cannot predict the future; perhaps one day they will be jobless. At a time like this their savings can spare them a great deal of suffering and help to see them through the hard time. In addition, saving money allows people to build up a larger sum. They can then buy something more worthwhile than the small things they can but if they spend the money right away. For example, they may be able to buy a house with their savings. Finally, he practice of saving helps people develop the habit of setting goals and planning for their future. In this way they are bound to lead more meaningful and successful lives.
通过省钱,人们给了自己更多的安全感。他们无法预测未来;也许有一天他们会失业。那时,他们的积蓄可以让他们避免很多痛苦,并帮助他们度过难关。此外,省钱可以让人们积累更多的钱。然后,他们可以买一些比小东西更有价值的东西,但如果他们马上花钱的话。例如,他们可以用自己的积蓄买一栋房子。最后,储蓄的实践帮助人们养成了设定目标和规划未来的习惯。这样,他们一定会过上更有意义、更成功的生活。
Most people would like to enjoy their money immediately. Nobody likes to wait for the things that he wants. However, if we learn to save our money, we cangain more advantages in the future. We will lead more secure and, thus, happier lives. We will also be able to buy the things we truly want but cannot afford right now.
大多数人都想立即享受他们的钱。面对想要的东西,没有人喜欢等待。然而,如果我们学会省钱,我们将来可以获得更多的优势。我们将过上更安全、更幸福的生活。我们也将能够买到我们真正想要但现在负担不起的东西。