I'm at Yifu Primary School, which is located in Xuhui district. It is not big but clean and tidy. I love my school very much.
There is a teaching building with four floors. There are many classrooms, a computer room, a library, and a multifunctional hall. We study in the classroom, we read in the library, and we dance and sing in the multifunctional hall. My classroom is on the fourth floor.
There is a big playground where we play football. There is a small beautiful garden with many trees and flowers. In the middle of the garden, there is a pool for goldfish. We like to take a walk after lunch in the garden.
点评
这是一篇介绍学校的说明文。学生在写此类说明文时很容易报流水账，用洋洋洒洒一大堆的句子去不断重复相似的内容，让人读起来味如嚼蜡。但是本文作者思路清晰，把介绍的角度分为教学楼和操场花园两部分。在介绍的过程中注意到同类的合并。语言简洁，表达清晰，条理性强，是值得同学们学习借鉴的说明文佳作。
重点表达
1．I'm at Yifu Primary School, which is located in Xuhui district. 我在位于徐汇区的逸夫小学就读。
2．It is not big but clean and tidy. 它不大但是干净整洁。
3．There is a teaching building with four floors… 我们学校有一栋四楼高的教学楼……
4．a multifunctional hall 一个多功能厅
5．in the middle of 在中间
6．take a walk 散步