互联网对交友的影响
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the impact of Internet on making friends based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“互联网对交友的影响”这一话题进行论述。
2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一个小女孩儿和她的妈妈就交朋友这个话题在进行面对面的交流。由注解文字可知，小女孩在学校不受大家喜欢，在脸谱社交网站上只有735个朋友，由此引发大家对互联网对交友影响的思考。
3. 文章立意：每个人都需要朋友。如今，随着科技的发展，人们不仅仅可以在现实生活中交朋友，还可以在网上交朋友。然而，网络交友有利有弊，大家应该慎重对待。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述漫画内容，突出互联网对人们交友的影响之大。
2. 第二段通过举例、引用等论证方式阐述网络交友的利弊：网络对交友有很多积极的影响，比如对内向的人来说就是一种不错的交友途径。但由于互联网的虚幻性，它又存在危险。
3. 第三段提出互联网交友趋势不可逆转，人们应该谨慎对待，好好利用网络而不是过度依赖网络。
参考范文
As is revealed in the cartoon, a girl is talking about her friends with her mother, saying “I’m the least popular girl in school. I only have 735 Facebook friends!” 1 The girl’s remark may seem to be a paradox, yet after a careful thought we can’t help feeling the great impact that Internet has on the way people make friends. 2
Undoubtedly, Internet has some positive effects on making friends. 3 It enables people to make friends from different places. 3 Also, it makes it easier for introverted people who are too shy to approach others in reality to make friends online, just like the girl in the picture. 3 Every coin has two sides, so does making friends through Internet. 3 For example, as the network life is fictitious, it is easy to cheat another person online. The newspaper often reports that there are some people getting hurt or being killed when they date their net friends. 4
As far as I’m concerned, it is irreversible that Internet is changing people’s way of making friends. What people should do is being careful and make good use of it instead of being overly dependent on it. 5
如图所示，一个女孩儿正在和她的妈妈聊她的朋友，她说道：“我在学校里是最不受喜欢的女孩儿，我在脸谱社交网上只有735个朋友。”这个女孩儿的话可能看起来有点儿自相矛盾，不过仔细思考后，我们不禁感叹互联网对人们交友的影响之大。
毫无疑问，互联网能够对交友产生一些积极的影响。网络使得人们能够与来自不同地方的人交朋友。同样，它使得那些在现实中过于羞涩、不敢主动与人交谈的内向的人更容易在网上交到朋友，就像图画中的小女孩一样。事物都有两面性，互联网交友也是如此。比如，由于互联网生活是虚幻的，欺骗别人是很容易的。报纸上经常有关于人们去见网友而受伤或遇害的报道。
在我看来，互联网正在改变人们的交友方式，这是不可逆转的。人们应该小心交友，充分利用互联网而不要过度依赖它。
范文点评
1. 开篇描述图片的内容。
2. 自然过渡，结合图片中的文字准确传递出这幅漫画的寓意。
3. 从两个方面论证了互联网对于交友的好处，从另一个方面论证了利用互联网交友的弊端，论据充分，论证有力。
4. 采用举例论证，恰如其分，同时也体现了论证方法的多样性。
5. 末段总结全文，表达作者观点，指出利用互联网交友这一趋势不可逆转，人们应利用好互联网而不是过度依赖它。
要点用法
reveal v. 显示，表明
paradox n. 自相矛盾的说法
have effects on 对……有影响
introverted adj. 内向的，含蓄的
approach v. 接近，靠近
fictitious adj. 虚幻的，虚构的
net friend 网友
irreversible adj. 不可逆转的
dependent on 依赖于，依靠
句法点评
1. Every coin has two sides, so does making friends through Internet.
该句是四、六级作文中分析利弊时常用的过渡句式，从分析优点自然过渡到分析缺点。相似的说法还有Just as every coin has two sides, it is true of making friends through Internet。
2. What people should do is being careful and make good use of it instead of being overly dependent on it.
名词性从句What people should do作主语，也可改为All that people should do。
交真正的朋友
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on making true friends by commenting on the remark, “As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生对引言进行评论，就“交真正的朋友”这一话题展开论述。
2. 文章立意：朋友是我们生活中必不可少的人，但真正的朋友却甚少。人生得一知己足矣。因此，要交真正的朋友。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要评论引言，然后提出论点：要交真正的朋友。
2. 第二段通过排比论证的方式阐述何谓真正的朋友，明确如何交友。
3. 第三段指出，交友勿需多，需交那些诚实可靠之人作为真正的朋友。
参考范文
“As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones.” This remark implies that real friends are important to our life. 1 Therefore, we should make true friends. 2
True friends always help and learn from each other; 3 true friends are always loyal to each other; 3 true friends always keep a secret for each other; 3 true friends are always dependable and reliable; 3 true friends never take advantage of each other; 3 true friends may not share the same way of life, but they are likely to share the same way of thinking. 3 In a word, true friends are friends through thick and thin. 4
Everyone needs friends. We can share happiness and sorrows with our friends. When we are in trouble, we can turn to them. 5 It’s a pity that only true friends can do that. Just as an old saying goes, “A friend in need is a friend indeed.” 5 Since the number of friends may not be so important, we should make friends with those who are honest and reliable. 6
“随着我们长大，我们意识到，重要的不是朋友越多越好，而是要有真正的朋友。”这句话意味着真正的朋友对我们的一生很重要。因此，我们要交真正的朋友。
真正的朋友始终相互帮助，相互学习；真正的朋友彼此始终真诚相待；真正的朋友始终相互为对方保守秘密；真正的朋友始终值得依靠和信赖；真正的朋友从不相互利用；真正的朋友也许没有共同的生活方式，但可能有着共同的思考方式。总之，真正的朋友可以患难与共。
每个人都需要朋友。和朋友我们可以分享快乐与悲伤。当我们陷入麻烦，我们可以向他们求助。可惜的是只有真正的朋友才能做到这一点。就像老话所说的：“患难见真情”。朋友的数量未必重要，所以，我们应该交那些诚实可靠的朋友。
范文点评
1. 开篇引入引言，并揭示引言含义。
2. 首段末句提出文章论点：我们要交真正的朋友。
3. 用排比论证的方式阐述什么是真正的朋友。
4. 对上文论述进行总结。
5. 末段进一步阐述交真正朋友的重要意义。
6. 末句重申观点，结束全文。
要点用法
dependable adj. 可靠的；可信赖的
take advantage of 利用
reliable adj. 可靠的
through thick and thin 在任何情况下；不顾艰难
句法点评
1. As we grow up, we realize it becomes less important to have more friends and more important to have real ones.
as引导时间状语从句，it为宾语从句中的形式主语，真正的主语是不定式to have more friends和to have real ones；宾语从句中less important和more important构成对照关系，共同充当宾语从句中的表语。
2. It’s a pity that only true friends can do that.
此句为主语从句句式：It’s+n. +that从句，主语从句句式的使用增加了文章句式的多样化。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.友谊是人生永恒的主题
2.友谊到底意味着什么
3.友谊的重要性。
范文：
What does friendship mean?
There is no definite answer. An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.
Friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.
Friendship isn't almighty, but no one can live happily without it.
Every one needs friends. One relies on his friends for a lot of help during his lifetime; friends not only help through his difficulties and hardships(艰难) but also share his joys. Without friends one feels lonely and solitary(寂寞的).
Knowing how valuable friends are, we should be very careful in making friends. In order to make friends one should reach out first instead of just waiting. When one takes in initiative(主动的行动), he will find many people who have common goals, tastes and interest with his. And his circle of friends grows. If one is always concerned about other people and helps them rid out a storm(平安度过困难), they will certainly become his good friends.
One should be polite, prudent(审慎的), sincere, honest, tolerant(宽恕的) and considerate in making friends. But one should also keep the principle in his mind that a good friends is helpful while a bad friends would be harmful. One should break off with false friends, get to know new ones and never forget old ones.
As distance test a horse’s strength, so does time reveal(展现) a person’s heart. A friend in need is a friend indeed. A long-term contact(接触) with someone will tell you who is a loyal(忠诚的) friend and who is not. Life is a long way full of troubles, difficulties, hardships and pain. It is imperative(必要的) to make good friends and keep the flowers of lasting friendship in full blossom(生长茂盛).
Friendship Encouraged Me
If you have a friend, yon＇ll feel happy; if you have a bosom friend, you＇ll feel rich; if you have a friend who gives his hands to you in emergency, you＇ll feel lucky. Thank God, I＇m a happy, rich and lucky girl. During my life, friendship is the most valuable wealth and unfading memory.
1998, my hard year. Because of lay very poor health, I had to remain in hospital. But it was my second year at high school! I worried about nay study and my future. What I felt was not only pain, but despair. Just then, my friend -- a politics teacher in my high school -- came to my rescue. As far as I know, this old man is also a famous lawyer with busy practice. But he gave up his practice more than one year and taught me in the hospital almost every day. He gave me both knowledge and the faith in the future.
With his help, I overcame the difficulty and became a college student. I couldn＇t express my thanks in words, because he did too much for me. He told me that he felt happy to light a path for me and wished me to have a brand-new future. I was lucky enough to have such a good friend. I love and respect him. In my heart, he is ray teacher, ray father, and above all, my best friend forever.
A letter
1.建议报考的专业及理由
2.报考该专业的基本条件
3.应当如何备考
A Letter in Reply to a Friend
Dear friend:
I am very glad to learn that you'd like to apply for admission to my university.
Since you are good at argumentation and debate, I strongly recommend that you major in law. So far as I know, you are an upright dynamo always ready to defend for the wronged people and let justice prevail. On the other hand, you seem to be a keen observer and analyst. You really have the makings of a good lawyer.
Now I should (like to) mention some important points you should pay attention to. First of all, you should exert yourself to get high scores in the coming college Entrance Examination, for laws is a very popular major in our university. There is fierce competition in the enrollment of newcomers. In addition to the routine preparation for the exam, it is necessary to have a sound body for your sound mind to dwell in. Go over all your lessons and read some books about law, and you will be more confident of your getting enrolled.
Just try your best, and you will give full expression to your talent in the future.
Good luck!
Yours
Zhangming
A letter
1.表示欢迎
2.提出对度假安排的建议
3.提醒应注意的事项
A letter to a Schoolmate
June 23, 2001
Dear Xiao Wang,
I am delighted to know that you will be able to visit me for a week during the National Day holiday. I am looking forward to your visit and to the opportunity to catch up. Welcome to my home in Nanjing!
As you know, Nanjing has many places of interest to see, to discover, and to enjoy. Among its historical sites are stone city wall, the Confucius Temple with its magnificent night view, and Dr. Sun Yetsen's Mausoleum. With all its universities, Nanjing is a cultural center, offering an abundance of artistic and musical performances. It's also a city of beautiful gardens and parks, such as the Xuanwu Lake Park. With all these features, we will have a fun-filled week, especially that in early-October, there are many sunny and mild days for outdoor activities. So, I would suggest visiting these places first, and deciding on the others as our week develops.
Finally, since at this time of the year the weather gets a little chilly in the evening, I would suggest that you bring some warm clothing with you. Also, as there will be crowds of people at the stations and on the trains, you need to be very careful with your belongings!
Best wishes for a pleasant journey!
Yours,
Zhang Ying