Shanghai is one of the biggest cities in China. I went to Shanghai with my parents during last summer vacation. We really had a very good time there.
On the first day, we went to visit the Oriental Pearl TV Tower . It is very tall and beautiful. The view was very amazing and beautiful when we stood on the top of the tower looking down at the whole city. Then we had dinner at the revolving restaurant. The dishes were very delicious. On the second day, we went to Yu Garden. Yu Garden was crowded with so many people. There were also lots of famous snacks, and we ate“Xiao Long”there. On the last day, we visited Shanghai Museum . There are many cultural relics there. I learned a lot of knowledge from our visit to the museum.
Shanghai is a great city. I hope to see Shanghai again in a few years.
-amazing ［ə'meɪzɪŋ ］ adj. 令人惊奇的
-whole ［həʊl ］ adj. 完整的，整个
-museum ［mju:'zi:əm ］ n. 博物馆
the Oriental Pearl TV Tower 东方明珠电视塔
on the top of 在……的顶部
revolving restaurant 旋转餐厅
be crowded with 充满了……；挤满……
learn knowledge from... 从……中学到知识
1. Shanghai is one of the biggest cities in China. 上海是中国最大的城市之一。
Tom is one of the tallest boys in our class. 汤姆是我们班上最高的男生之一。
I think Jane Eyre is one of the most classic novels.
我认为《简·爱》是最经典的小说之一。
2. I learned a lot of knowledge from our visit to the museum.
通过参观上海博物馆，我学到了很多知识。
We can learn almost everything from books.
我们可以从书本中学到几乎所有知识。
We should learn from Mary, because she has so many fine qualities.
我们应该向玛丽学习，因为她具有许多优秀品质。
我们的上海之行
上海是中国最大的城市之一。去年暑假期间，我和我爸妈一同前往上海。我们在那里玩得很痛快。
第一天，我们参观了东方明珠电视塔。东方明珠电视塔高耸入云，非常美丽。我们站在东方明珠塔的顶部，俯瞰整座城市，景色壮观，美不胜收。然后我们在旋转餐厅吃了晚饭，那里的菜肴美味可口。第二天，我们去了豫园。豫园人山人海。那儿也有许多著名的小吃，我们在那里吃了小笼包。最后一天，我们参观了上海博物馆。博物馆里有许多文物。通过参观上海博物馆，我学到了很多知识。
上海是一座伟大的城市。我希望几年后再去看看上海。