Children's Day is June 1st in China. I love Children's Day. I can play on Children's Day.
On the Children's Day this year, I went to school at half past seven. I played many games at school with my friends. When it was eleven o'clock, I had the special lunch for Children's Day with my friends and my teachers. After lunch I went back home with my best friends. I had a party at my home. We played PSP together. We rode bicycles in the park near my home. I also invited them to dinner at the Pizza Hut. We ate and laughed and talked a lot when we were having dinner. We were very happy. What a wonderful day!
I would like to have a Children's Day every day!
点评
这是一篇描写“六一”儿童节的文章。小作者没有按照报流水账的形式写作，而是挑选了邀请小朋友到自己家一起度过“六一”儿童节的情节来写，令人感到现在的孩子是多么希望有伙伴一起玩耍啊！
重点表达
1．When it was eleven o'clock, I had the special lunch for Children's Day with my friends and my teachers. 十一点钟的时候，我和同学、老师一起吃了六一节特别午餐。
2．After lunch I went back home with my best friends. 午餐后，我和我最好的朋友们一起到我家。
3．We ate and laughed and talked a lot when we were having dinner. 我们吃饭的时候，边吃边笑边交谈。