Today, I climbed a big tree with Ryan. At the beginning, I was so scared, but my brother Ryan and another little girl climbed upon the tree and laughed at me. And I was very upset. I went back home. Later my brother Ryan told me, "Nothing is impossible. I believe you can do it." So I went out again and climbed the tree. Finally, I succeeded. I was so happy that I felt so proud of myself. I can climb the tree now, yeah!
点评
在这篇文章中，小作者描写了他如何克服恐惧的心理，和小伙伴一起爬树的故事。文章虽然短小，但语句流畅，文笔通顺，充分体现出孩子的童趣和童心。
重点表达
1．At the beginning, 1 was so scared, but my brother Ryan and another little girl climbed upon the tree and laughed at me. 一开始，我十分害怕，但是我的弟弟瑞恩和另外一个女孩爬上了树，并嘲笑我（胆小）。
2．I was so happy that I felt so proud of myself. 我是那么开心，我为自己感到骄傲。