开放式英语作文怎么写?

英语作文    发布时间:2024-06-06  
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开放式作文是一种自由命题作文,通常只给一个话题或提供一个写作的开头,写作难度较大,发挥的空间很大。开放式作文的内容比较广泛,一般是以学生熟悉的生活题材为主。北京卷近几年增加的第二篇作文就是典型的开放式作文,它所给提示比较简单,要求学生根据提供的情景,写一段文字接续或描叙。开放式作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力,拓展文章主题,组织篇章结构。该考查形式既能体现出学生思维的活跃性,又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。    

开放式作文的写作应注意以下几点:    

1.审题要准,定位要明。即首先弄清楚写作题目的要求,然后读懂题目所给提示信息中的写作对象、语境、人称、时态、背景等,准确把握写作的要旨。    

2.条理清晰,逻辑严密。一篇好的作文首先要做到条理清晰,逻辑严密,这样才能把要表达的内容清楚明白地告诉读者。同时,作文的内容还要做到思想健康和积极向上。    

3.句式多变,详略得当。文章应该做到有主有次,有详有简,既有概括性的描写,也有细节性的叙述,这样才使读者明白哪里是重点,哪里是次重点。同时要灵活使用多种句型,防止文章可能出现的呆板、乏味的语言表达。    

4、内容完整,首尾呼应。好的作文自然要做到内容完整,把文章的全部信息完整地展示给读者。同时应该做到有头有尾,首尾呼应,展现给读者一个完整的画面。    

重点英语词汇及表达    

from the picture, I can see, first,  while, at the same time, reasonable, however, by the way, to tell the truth,  after all, on account of, owing to, due to, in brief, even if, a sense of, as  you know, as is known to all, suggest, in my opinion, etc.    

   

1.As we can see in the picture, a mother  duck is holding an umbrella to protect her babies from strong sunshine.  从图片我们可以看到,一只鸭妈妈正在给她的孩子们撑伞以防止他们被强烈的阳光灼伤。    

2.In my opinion, too much love will  spoil us. 在我看来,过分溺爱对我们是有害的。    

3.So give us more chances to face the  challenge ourselves.    

所以,请给我们更多直接面对挑战的机会。    

4.If I could be any age, I would like  very much to be an adult.    

如果我能选择年龄的话,我非常希望成为一位成年人。    

5.What is more important is that I can  make my contributions to society, helping more children who are in need of  enough food, medical treatment and good education.    

更重要的是我能为社会贡献自己的力量,帮助更多需要食物、医疗和良好教育的孩子。    

6.From the picture, I can see a mother  bird flying in the sky.    

从这幅图上我看到一只鸟妈妈在天上飞翔。    


On one end stand  animals: elephants, tigers, lions, giraffes... On the other end are people  holding guns. It seems as though people are stronger because they have  weapons and can easily kill the animals. But actually if the animals die out,  people will fall down and die. This picture shows the situation in the world  now. A growing number of people are occupying more and more land, using more  and more natural resources. They are killing themselves, in fact!    

一边是动物:大象、老虎、狮子、长颈鹿等,另一边是手持猎枪的人类。看起来人类似乎更强大些,因为他们有武器,可以很容易地置动物于死地。但是事实上,如果动物灭亡的话,人类也将会倒下死亡。这幅图片向我们展示了目前世界的状况。人类数量持续增多,占据越来越多的土地,并使用越来越多的自然资源。他们这样做其实是在自取灭亡。    


英语范文    

In the picture, between two  closely-located buildings grows a big tree. Unlike most trees, this one bends  in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. The picture  reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties,  they never give up but try their best to find a way out. Life can be hard.  But if we have the courage and determination, we will finally get the  sunshine we want as the tree in the picture does.    

图片中,在两栋距离很近的建筑物中间长着一棵大树。跟大多数的树不同,这棵树的中间部分弯曲了,但拼命挣扎着向上长,以获取阳光。这幅图片让我想起了在困境中成功的人。面对困难,他们没有放弃,而是尽全力找到出路。生活并不是一帆风顺的。但是如果我们足够勇敢和果断,最终就像图片中的树一样,我们也一定能够得到自己想要的阳光。