最好的学习方法是模仿范文。可以找到一些高分或满分作文，仔细阅读并分析其结构、语言表达和论证方式，然后根据自己的情况进行改进和模仿。
骄兵必败
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Pride Goes Before a Fall . You can explain how you understand the saying by citing examples. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生就“骄兵必败”这一话题进行阐述。
2. 文章立意：谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后。
写作思路
1. 开篇引入谚语“骄兵必败”，加以简单评述，并指出可以从三个方面证明。
2. 第二段从三个方面论述骄兵必败的观点。
3. 第三段再次强调骄傲的害处，重申观点。
参考范文
Pride Goes Before a Fall
“Pride goes before a fall” is a proverb with which all of us are familiar. 1 I fully agree with it. For me, this saying can be proved from three aspects. 2
First of all 3 , if you indulge yourself in the past glory and are too proud of your success, you will overestimate your competence, which prevents you from making progress. As a result, you may neglect the potential crisis and end up in failure. Furthermore 3 , every one of us cherishes a fantastic dream in our heart—the ultimate goal of our life. If we want to make our dream come true or realize the final goal, we should never stop the pursuit of it. Lastly 3 , great men in history are always modest. Their tolerance and openness have been proved vital to their success.
Modesty makes one go forward while conceit makes one lag behind. Knowing that there is still room for improvement, we will keep making progress and perfecting ourselves. 4
骄兵必败
“骄兵必败”是一句我们都熟悉的话。我完全赞同这种说法。我认为,这句话可以从三个方面来证明。
首先，如果你沉浸在过去的荣耀中并且对自己的成功过于骄傲，你就会高估自己的能力，这就会阻止你进步。结果，你可能会忽视潜在的危机并最终失败。此外，我们每个人在心底都有一个美好的梦想——我们终极的生活目标。如果我们想实现梦想或者完成终极目标，我们就永远不能停止对它的追求。最后，历史上的伟人通常是谦逊的。他们的宽容和开明对他们的成功而言是十分重要的。
谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后。知道自己仍然有进步的空间，我们就会不断进步并完善自己。
范文点评
1. 开篇引入谚语，指出该谚语广为人知。
2. 自然过渡，表明自己赞同谚语的说法，并指出可以从三个方面证明谚语的观点。
3. 分三个层次论证自己的观点，条理清晰，论证有力。first of all, furthermore, lastly分别相当于firstly, secondly, thirdly，表示论述的先后顺序，应多注意积累同义表达，以避免俗套和语言的贫乏。
4. 重申观点，指出谦虚方知有进步的空间。
要点用法
indulge oneself in 沉溺于
be proud of 以……为骄傲/自豪
overestimate v. 估计过高
competence n. 能力；胜任
come true 实现
conceit n. 骄傲，自负
lag behind 落后；滞后
句法点评
1. “Pride goes before a fall” is a proverb with which all of us are very familiar.
此处用到了“with+which”引导的定语从句，which指代前面的proverb，with来自于短语be familiar with。
2. Modesty makes one go forward while conceit makes one lag behind.
本句对应中文“谦虚使人进步，骄傲使人落后”，连词while表示前后对比，常译作“而”，此处对应的中文译文前后两个分句暗含了对比、对照的意思。
教育的目的
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Purpose of Education . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
Some people say one's education should be tailored to meet social demand.
Others argue that one should be educated to fulfill one's own dream.
What's your opinion about the purpose of education?
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生写一篇关于“教育的目的”的文章。
2. 文章立意：教育的目的是什么？对此一直以来都有争论。个人认为，教育应该兼顾个人理想和社会需求。
写作思路
1. 第一段以问句开头，围绕问句引出正反双方的观点。
2. 第二段从作者观点出发，深入阐述教育的目的。
3. 第三段重申主题，深化读者对主题的认识。
参考范文
The Purpose of Education
What does education aim for? 1 This is a topic which is usually talked about. Some believe that education should be tailored to meet social needs. However, others hold that the purpose of education is to help educatees realize their personal dreams. 2
In my opinion, education should give consideration to both social needs and personal dreams. 3 Firstly 4 , education should try to meet social needs in order to promote the sustained and healthy development of our society. We should be guided by the demands of society, establish the scientific education system, and form the virtuous circle in which education serves society and society nurtures education. Furthermore 4 , in the long run, education should respect educatees' personal dreams and cultivate talents with innovation consciousness because they are decisive forces which push the society forward.
To sum up, education should take both social needs and personal dreams into consideration. Neither of them can be sacrificed at the cost of the other. Only with the combination of the two can we make a successful and meaningful education. 5
教育的目的
教育的目的是什么？这是人们经常说起的话题。有些人认为，教育应该为满足社会需求而量身打造，而另一些人认为，教育应该以帮助受教育者实现个人理想为目的。
我个人认为，教育应该兼顾社会需求和个人理想。首先，教育要努力满足社会需求，促进社会持续健康发展。以社会需求为导向，构建科学的教育体系，形成教育服务社会、社会反哺教育的良性循环。此外，从长远来说，教育应该尊重受教育者的个人理想，培养出有创新意识的人才，因为他们是推动社会向前发展的决定性力量。
总而言之，教育需要把社会需求和个人的理想都考虑进去。这二者之间任何一方都不应该以牺牲另一方为代价。只有二者结合的教育才是成功而有意义的。
范文点评
1. 首句以问句开篇，围绕此问句为中心展开讨论。
2. 从两个不同角度对问句进行回答。
3. 给出个人观点，并对首段提出的观点加以总结。
4. 从两方面加以论证。
5. 总结段把前面的讨论推向一个高潮，突出主题。
要点用法
tailor v. 专门制作，订做
educatee n. 受教育者
sustained adj. 持续的
virtuous circle 良性循环
nurture v. 养育，培养
cultivate v. 培养
innovation consciousness 创新意识
decisive adj. 决定性的
sacrifice v. 牺牲；献祭
句法点评
1. We should be guided by the demands of society, establish the scientific education system, and form the virtuous circle in which education serves society and society nurtures education.
此处使用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句，in which相当于关系副词where。
2. Only with the combination of the two can we make a successful and meaningful education.
节约水资源
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on water saving based on the picture below by explaining the significance of saving water resources . You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“节约水资源”这一话题进行简述，并解释节约水资源的重要性。
2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一个自来水龙头，下方摆放了许多只容器等待接水。然而，水龙头里的水却是在一滴一滴地往外流，显示出水资源的极度匮乏，说明人们在日常生活中节水的重要性。
3. 文章立意：地球上的水资源，尤其淡水资源严重匮乏，已经影响到了人们的日常生活。呼吁人们节约用水。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述图画内容，然后提出论点：水资源缺乏，节水很重要。
2. 第二段从三个方面说明节约水资源的重要性：首先，根据统计数字说明水资源很缺乏；其次，水对于人们自身健康的重要性；再次，水对于人们生产活动的重要性。
3. 第三段呼应文章论点，再次强调节水的重要性，呼吁人们采取行动节水。
参考范文
From the picture given above, we can observe that there are many containers under the tap, waiting to be filled with water. 1 However, instead of the normal water flow, only drips of water come out of the faucet. 2 Obviously, the picture intends to remind people of the fact of water shortage and calls for people's action of saving water. 3
Saving water resources is of great importance to everyone on the earth. 4 First of all 4 , fresh water is a scarce resource. According to the statistics, less than 1% of all water on the earth is fresh water, and of that 1%, most is in ice caps or in deep aquifers, which means it is not really accessible for consumption. Second 4 , water is essential for people's health. A healthy person needs about 2.5 to 4 liters 5 of water per day. Third 4 , water is important for agriculture and industrial development, which provide food and all other things for people's life.
To sum up, water resource is scarce but extremely important for people's life. Therefore, everyone needs to take action to save water. 6
从上图我们可以看到水龙头下方摆放了许多容器等待接水。然而，水龙头放出的水流量却是不正常的，而是一滴一滴地向外滴水。显然，这幅图片旨在提醒人们水资源缺乏，并号召人们采取措施节约用水。
节约用水对地球上的每个人都十分重要。首先，淡水是一种稀缺资源。据统计，地球上的淡水资源不到总水量的1％，而且其中绝大部分位于冰山或极深的地下，意味着很难真正被人们利用。其次，水资源对人们的健康至关重要。一个正常的成人每天大约需要2.5到4升的水。第三，水对于农业和工业发展也极其重要。农业和工业为人类的生活提供食物和其他所需的各种物品。
总而言之，水资源稀少，对人们的生活又极其重要。因此，每个人都要采取行动节约用水。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容。
2. 自然过渡，逐渐让读者注意到文章话题——水资源缺乏。
3. 首段末句明确表达图片的意图：呼吁人们节约用水。
4. 分三个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。
5. 援引数字证据，有说服力，同时也体现了论证方法的多样性。
6. 末段总结全文，重申观点，再次唤起人们节约用水的意识。
要点用法
observe v. 观察；观测
faucet n. 水龙头
remind of 提醒，使想起
call for 要求，呼吁
scarce adj. 缺乏的；稀少的
aquifer n. 地下蓄水层；砂石含水层
accessible adj. 易使用的；易得到的
consumption n. 消费
take action 采取行动
句法点评
1. From the picture given above, we can observe that there are many containers under the tap, waiting to be filled with water.
首句采用了there be句型描述静态图画，这是看图作文中的常用句式，类似的表达方法还有：What we can see from the picture above is that there is/are ....此外，waiting to be filled with water为现在分词短语作补足语。
2. According to the statistics, less than 1% of all water on the earth is fresh water, and of that 1%, most is in ice caps or in deep aquifers, which means it is not really accessible for consumption.
这句话中包含了一个关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句。
节约用电
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Saving Electricity . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
Energy demand is ever-increasing as world population grows.
Household electricity accounts for a considerable fraction of world power and saving household electricity is significant for energy saving.
To save electricity we should...
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据给定的提纲就“节约用电”这一话题进行阐述，并论述如何节约用电。
2. 文章立意：世界人口的激增造成了各种能源短缺，家庭用电需求不断增强，因而节约能源意义重大。
写作思路
1. 第一段点明主题，即随着世界人口的增加，对资源的需求日益增加，引出电力短缺的问题。
2. 第二段通过详细分析，阐明电力短缺产生的主要原因，同时指出这一问题的紧迫性。
3. 第三段由浅及深，提出具体的解决办法。
参考范文
On Saving Electricity
As world population grows, the energy demand is ever-increasing. And the lack of electricity is particularly conspicuous. 1
As household electricity accounts for a considerable fraction of electricity consumption, saving household electricity is significant for energy saving. 2 However, the excessive using of industrial and urban household electricity, the lack of traditional raw material to generate electricity and the waste contribute to the lack of electricity. The problem needs to be settled instantly. Electricity is precious and we should save it not only for us, but also for our offsprings.
To save electricity, initially 3 , we should raise awareness of saving electricity like reducing the using of electric lamp when unnecessary and turning off lights when leaving. Then call on more friends and family members to do so. Furthermore 3 , use energy saving lamps as much as possible, which will make a great contribution to energy saving. Last 3 , it should be encouraged to take advantage of more environmentally friendly raw material to generate electricity by government, which has less pollution to the environment.
节约用电
随着世界人口的增加，对能源的需求也在不断增长。电力短缺是一个相当引人关注的问题。
因为家庭用电占电力消耗中很大的一部分，所以节约家庭用电对节约能源意义重大。然而，工业和城市家庭的过度用电，传统发电原料的短缺，浪费等原因造成了用电的短缺。这一问题亟待解决。电是宝贵的资源，我们应该节约用电,这么做不仅仅是为了我们自己，也是为了我们的子孙后代。
要节约用电，首先我们应该提高节约用电的意识，比如，在不需要的时候不开灯，用完后随手关灯。然后，号召更多亲戚朋友一起这样做。其次，尽可能多地使用节能灯，这对节约能源会极为有利。最后，政府应该鼓励使用更环保的原料发电，这对环境造成的污染会更小。
范文点评
1. 开篇直接按照提纲第一点来写，简明扼要。
2. 自然过渡，根据提纲第二点内容，阐明电力短缺产生的主要原因，并指出这一问题亟待解决的紧迫性。
3. 末段按照提纲第三点，分三个层次阐述如何节约用电。
要点用法
ever-increasing adj. 不断增长的
conspicuous adj. 引人注目的
considerable adj. 相当可观的
fraction n. 部分
raw material 原材料
offspring n. 子孙后代
awareness n. 意识
contribute to 造成，促成；有利于
句法点评
1. As household electricity accounts for a considerable fraction of electricity consumption, saving household electricity is significant for energy saving.
此为as引导的原因状语从句，表原因。
2. Electricity is precious and we should save it not only for us, but also for our offsprings.
句中not only...but also...结构的使用，增强语气的同时，丰富了文章的句式结构。
今日事今日毕
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Never to Delay by commenting on the saying, “Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生从评论“今日事今日毕”这一引言入手，写一篇题目为《绝不拖延》的作文。
2. 文章立意：人们每天都有要做的事情，如果拖延，好多重要的事情会被拖得无法如期完成。因此，拖延往往会让一个人停止前进的脚步。今日事今日毕是人们取得更大成就的保障之一。
写作思路
1. 第一段结合谚语引出“绝不拖延”这一话题。
2. 第二段论述拖延的惯性、危害性。
3. 第三段表明自己的观点，再次强调不要拖延。
参考范文
Never to Delay
Since our childhood, we have been told never to delay, just as the saying goes, “Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow.” 1
Frankly speaking, in our daily life many people tend to refuse to do things immediately owing to their indolence. Whether the thing is easy or not, they would rather enjoy their free time instead of going at it. Therefore, there are many people who like to put off things they should do today until tomorrow. As they are always behind schedule, there will be more and more things for them to address with each passing day. Faced with great pressure to fix all of them at a time, they usually can't accomplish their goals in the end. 2
I agree that we should never put off what we can do today until tomorrow. 3 We should work hard today for we don't know what will happen and how much we may be hindered tomorrow. Maybe there will be more important things to do. So seize the present and don't make excuses to put off until tomorrow what we are supposed to do today. 4
绝不拖延
我们从小就被告知绝不要拖延，正如谚语所说：“今日事今日毕。”
坦率地说，在日常生活中，因为懒惰，许多人往往不愿意即刻做事。不管容易还是困难，他们宁愿享受着悠闲而不是着手去做。因此，有很多人就喜欢把今天应该做的事推到明天去做。由于他们总是落后于预定计划，日复一日，他们每天都会有越来越多的事需要处理。面临着一次要处理所有事情的巨大压力，他们通常无法最终完成目标。
绝不把今天能做的事推到明天，我同意这种说法。我们就应该今天努力去做，因为我们不知道明天会发生什么或者明天我们会遇到什么阻碍。也许明天会有更重要的事。所以，要抓住当下，不要找任何借口推脱今天该做的事。
范文点评
1. 开篇结合谚语引出话题：绝不要拖延。
2. 从日常生活着手，论述拖延对人们生活的不良影响，解释不应拖延的原因。
3. 末段首句明确表达自己的态度：赞同不应拖延的观点。
4. 重申观点，再次强调不要拖延。
要点用法
frankly speaking 坦率地说
indolence n. 懒惰
behind schedule 落后于预定计划
in the end 最终，最后；终于
hinder v. 阻碍
be supposed to do sth. 应当做某事
句法点评
1. As they are always behind schedule, there will be more and more things for them to address with each passing day.
在英文中，“处理”问题或事情可以用多个动词来表示，本句用了address一词，文中还出现了do, go at it和fix。要注意使用同义词或近义词来表达相同的意思，力求表达方式丰富多样。
2. Faced with great pressure to fix all of them at a time, they usually can't accomplish their goals in the end.
本句采用了faced with...这一过去分词短语，在此处表示原因。过去分词（短语）、现在分词（短语）等非谓语的使用，会使英文句子显得更加紧凑。
谨慎利弊谈
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the advantages and disadvantages of being cautious by referring to the saying “The policy of being too cautious is the greatest risk of all .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what is the best policy for making right decisions . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据 “过度谨慎危害最大”这句话，写一篇文章，可以举例说明。
2. 文章立意：谨慎，从一方面来说，能帮助我们避免因冲动作出错误决定而造成损失。但从另一方面来说，过度的谨慎也会使我们错失一些良机。在今天这个高速发展的社会，机会稍纵即逝，只有那些敢于决断的人才能把握住机会，获得成功。
写作思路
1. 第一段指出任何事物都有两面性，并围绕着事物的两面性来对比说明谨慎的利弊。
2. 第二段通过一个小故事举例说明过度谨慎的危害。
3. 第三段深化主题，提出做决定的正确方法，即“敢于决断”。
参考范文
Every coin has two sides. 1 There is no exception to cautiousness. 2 Cautiousness, on one hand, can help us avoid losses brought about by impulsive decisions. On the other hand, too much cautiousness may cost us good opportunities. 3 Therefore, it is believed by some that “The policy of being too cautious is the greatest risk of all.” 4
A young man loves his job very much, but after a few years of working, he has a thought of starting a business because of his dissatisfaction with all kinds of restrictions in his job. However, since he had the thought of establishing a business, ten years have passed and he still works in the company. Why? Because each time he tried, he felt that it was not the right time, for example, insufficient funds, sluggish economy, the birth of children... 5 This story told us that being too cautious and being afraid of trying something new may cause serious damage to our achievements. 6
In today's fast-developing society, opportunities can be fleeting. Only those who dare to make decisions can grasp the opportunities and achieve success. 7
任何事情都有两面性，谨慎也不例外。谨慎，从一方面来说，能帮助我们避免因冲动作出错误决定而造成损失。但从另一方面来说，过度的谨慎也会使我们错失良机。因而有人相信，过度谨慎危害最大。
有个年轻人很喜欢他的工作，但是工作几年后，他对于工作上的种种限制愈发不满，因而想创业。然而，自从他有创业的想法以来，10年过去了，他依然在原来的公司上班。为什么呢？因为他每次试图创业时，总是感觉时机不成熟。例如，资金不足，经济不景气，新婴儿的诞生……这个故事告诉我们，过于慎重而不敢尝试新的事物，会对我们的成就造成严重的伤害。
在今天这个高速发展的社会，机会稍纵即逝，只有那些敢于决断的人才能把握住机会，获得成功。
范文点评
1. 开篇用一句成语引入，从正反两面进行分析说明。
2. 通过该句，自然过渡到谨慎利弊谈。
3. 通过正反说明谨慎利弊，对二者进行了对比。
4. 引用名言作第一段结尾，同时也点明了文章论点。
5. 文章主题段通过一个小故事举例说明过度谨慎的危害。
6. 点明小故事的寓意，进一步强化了实例对主题的论证。
7. 将整篇文章主题凝缩，通过一句话加以总结，同时解答了做决定的正确方法。
要点用法
cautiousness n. 谨慎；小心
avoid v. 避免；躲避
bring about 引起；导致
impulsive adj. 冲动的；受感情驱使的
sluggish adj. 萧条的
achievement n. 成就
fleeting adj. 稍纵即逝的
句法点评
1. Every coin has two sides.
这是一句英语成语，表示“凡事都有两面性”。
2. Only those who dare to make decisions can grasp the opportunities and achieve success.
进与退
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on stepping forward and stepping backward by referring to the saying “You will either step forward into growth, or you will step backward into safety .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据 “要么前进收获成长，要么后退得保平安”这句话，写一篇关于“进与退”的文章，可以举例说明。
2. 文章立意：人生如逆水行舟，不进则退。如果你勇往直前，成功就在前方等着你。如果你退后到自己的安乐窝，那么你就没有任何成功的机会。
写作思路
1. 开篇段落直接指明，人生中没有其他选择，只有前进或者后退。
2. 主体段落分别从前进及后退两方面展开论述，为人们指明方向。
3. 结尾段落继续从前进及后退两方面呼应首段，对首段的主题作进一步深化。
参考范文
There are no excessive choices for us to live in the world: either step forward into growth, or step backward into safety. 1
We may face all kinds of difficulties unexpectedly in the process of advancing. We may also confront frustration and failure. However, these experiences are valuable assets for us, which will enrich our experience, improve our ability, help us grow and lead us to success eventually. 2
If we choose stepping backward, we can get to safety; however, this is transitory. Although we don't need to meet difficulties and challenges actively, we have to make effort just to keep the temporary safety within the development of the society. Just as the truth that “In the future, the only constant is change. If you don't change, you will be washed out by the constantly changing future”, told in the book Who Moved My Cheese ? 3
In a word, life is like sailing against the current: either you keep forging ahead or you keep falling behind. If you advance bravely, the success is just around the corner waiting for you. If you draw back to your cosy nest, you won't have any chance to succeed. 4
我们生活于这个世界，要么前进收获成长，要么后退得保平安，除此之外，别无选择。
在前进的过程中，我们可能会遇到各种意想不到的困难，我们也可能遭受挫折和失败。但是，这些经历对于我们来说是宝贵的财富。它可以使我们增加经验，使我们增强能力，使我们收获成长，并最终带领我们走向成功。
如果我们选择后退，我们将获得平安，但是这种平安是暂时的。我们虽不需要主动去面对困难与挑战，但是随着社会的发展即使是为了维持暂时的平安我们也不得不付出努力。正如《谁动了我的奶酪？》一书告诉我们的道理“未来，变化是唯一的不变。不改变，就会被瞬息万变的未来所淘汰。”
总而言之，人生如逆水行舟，不进则退。如果你勇往直前，成功就在前方等着你。如果你退后到自己的安乐窝，那么你就没有任何成功的机会。
范文点评
1. 开篇点题，直截了当。
2. 指出前进可能会带来困难和挑战，但是最终将带给我们成功。
3. 指出后退可能获得暂时的平安，但是最终将被淘汰。
4. 结尾段继续从两方面加以说明，加深主题。
要点用法
excessive adj. 过多的；过分的
unexpectedly adv. 出乎意料地，意外地
confront v. 遭遇；面对
frustration n. 挫折
eventually adv. 最后，终于
transitory adj. 暂时的
constant adj. 不变的
wash out 淘汰
constantly adv. 不断地
forge ahead 取得进展
fall behind 落在后面
cosy nest 安乐窝
句法点评
1. However, these experiences are valuable assets for us, which will enrich our experience, improve our ability, help us grow and lead us to success eventually.
本句中包含which引导的非限制性定语从句，修饰主句的主语these experiences。
2. Although we don't need to meet difficulties and challenges actively, we have to make effort just to keep the temporary safety within the development of the society.
经验的重要性
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Experience without learning is better than learning without experience .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make yourself more experienced . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据给定的话语就“经验和学习的关系”这一话题展开论述，阐明经验的重要性。
2. 文章立意：经验从学习中得来，但没有经验的学习只是一纸空文，没什么意义。因此，经验很重要。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要解释给定话语的含义，然后提出论点：经验很重要。
2. 第二段通过成功人士的做法说明经验的重要性，同时提出如何使自己更具有经验。
3. 第三段以大学生为例论述使自己经验丰富的方法。
参考范文
“Experience without learning is better than learning without experience.” The saying means that experience is of vital importance and one can have only learning with no experience. It stresses the importance of experience. 1
I totally agree with that. 2 Successful people are willing to learn from their experience immediately. They know that failure is the mother of success. Whenever they fail, after introspecting for a while, they can learn a lot from their experience. Doing this, they can know the mistakes and make some changes. Then they will start again and continue struggling for success. They do know the importance of experience. So what can you do to make yourself more experienced? 3
For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work. There's no doubt that we'll be afforded a unique edge over the majority of our contemporaries. 4
“有经验而无学问胜于有学问而无经验。”这句话的意思是，经验是至关重要的，如果不实践，人只能空有知识。它强调了经验的重要性。
我完全同意这种看法。成功人士愿意及时吸取经验。他们懂得失败乃成功之母。每当他们失败时，短时间反省之后，他们都能从失败的经验中汲取很多教训。这样，他们就能了解自己的错误并做出一些改变，然后重振旗鼓，继续为成功而斗争。他们的确懂得经验的重要性，那么做些什么才能丰富你的经验呢？
对我来说，大学的高年级学生花费一些时间从求职和志愿者活动中获取经验是值得的，这会为我们提供必要的职场技能与经验，提升我们在雇主眼中的吸引力，因为这些活动能塑造我们坚强的品格并展示一种内在的工作欲望。毋庸置疑，我们会超越大多数同龄人而获得一种独特的优势。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要解释给定话语的含义，同时结合话语含义给出其要说明的观点：经验的重要性。
2. 第二段首句明确表达自己的观点：赞同经验很重要。
3. 以成功人士的经验为例，论述经验的重要性。
4. 以大学生为例，论述如何让自己经验丰富，并提供切实可行的做法。
要点用法
be willing to do 乐意做
introspect v. 反省，内省
worthwhile adj. 值得的
vocational adj. 职业的
workplace n. 工作场所
boost v. 促进；增加
appeal n. 吸引力；感染力
innate adj. 内在的；固有的；先天的
unique edge 独特的优势
contemporary n. 同时代的人
句法点评
1. They do know the importance of experience.
此句中用了“do+动词原形”表示强调的结构，增加了句式的多样性。
2. For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work.