关于创造力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on creativity . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
What is creativity about?
The ways to develop creativity.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据提纲的内容就“创造力”这一话题进行简述，并解释。
2. 文章立意：创造力是21世纪最重要的能力之一。想要培养创造力，学生自己要养成独立思考的习惯，开拓创新，老师也应想尽办法为学生提供一切可能，使其寻求独到的见解。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述创造力，然后提出问题：应如何培养创造力。
2. 第二段讲述创造力的培养主要通过两个渠道，一是学生自己坚持独立思考和广泛阅读；二是老师多提供机会鼓励学生寻求独到的见解。
3. 第三段呼应论点，再次强调创造力的重要性。
参考范文
Creativity is about learning to do something with a different perspective. 1 Apparently, creativity is a powerful resource we should make full use of. 2 But how to develop creativity? Two key points are concluded as follows: 3
First of all 4 , as for students, we must keep thinking independently and enjoying asking questions. And also 4 , we should be fully aware of the importance of extensive reading. The more books we read, the broader our horizon is, and the more new ideas we can work out. In addition 4 , teachers play a significant role in cultivating students’ creativity. For example, it is teachers’ responsibility to encourage students to answer more open-ended questions and come up with unique solutions. Teachers are supposed to provide more possibilities for the students, rather than telling them there is only one answer to each question.
All in all, we must recognize the importance of creativity as a crucial ability in the 21st century and spare no efforts to enhance creativity among children, youths and adults. Only in this way can we expect a promising future. 5
创造力关乎学会从不同的角度做事情。显然，创造力是我们应充分利用的强大资源。然而，创造力应如何培养呢？以下两点是关键。
首先，作为学生来讲，我们必须坚持独立思考，乐于提问题。同时，我们也应该充分意识到广泛阅读的重要性。我们书读得越多，见识就越广，产生的新想法就越多。另外，老师对于培养学生的创造力起着重要的作用。比如，老师有责任鼓励学生回答开放式的问题并得出独到的解决办法。老师应当给学生提供更多的可能性而不是告诉他们任何问题只有一个答案。
总之，创造力是21世纪的一项重要能力，我们必须认识到它的重要性，并不遗余力地增强儿童、青年人及成年人的创造力。只有这样我们才能迎来光明的前途。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述创造力的内涵。
2. 自然过渡，引出创造力的重要性，紧扣作文话题。
3. 首段最后两句明确说明培养创造力的关键要素有两点。
4. 分点论述，条理清晰；举例论证，增强说服力。
5. 末段总结全文，重申培养创造力的重要性。
要点用法
creative adj. 有创造力的
creativity n. 创造力
extensive adj. 广泛的
horizon n. 视野，眼界
cultivate v. 培养
promising adj. 有希望的
句法点评
1. For example, it is teachers’ responsibility to encourage students to answer more open-ended questions and come up with unique solutions.
这句话使用了it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式to encourage students to answer more open-ended questions and come up with unique solutions，由于主语太长，为避免头重脚轻，用it作形式主语。
2. Teachers are supposed to provide more possibilities for the students, rather than telling them there is only one answer to each question.
be supposed to do sth.，表示“应该做某事”，用来表示劝告、建议、义务、责任等，相当于情态动词should。此外还包含rather than这个词组，意为“而不是，而非”。
缓解交通压力的举措
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Measures to Alleviate the Traffic Pressure . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
The rapid expansion of cities has caused numerous problems. Urban traffic pressure has perplexed citizens of most cities.
In order to alleviate the increasing traffic pressure, we should take such measures as...
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据提纲的内容就“缓解交通压力的举措”这一话题展开论述。
2. 文章立意：当今社会，随着城市化进程的加快，城市交通拥挤问题已成为摆在政府面前一个亟待解决的重大问题。如果能有效采取一些措施，交通压力问题并非不可解决。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述提纲，然后指出客观事实：交通压力问题日趋严重。
2. 第二段通过举例的方式阐述为解决交通拥堵应采取的措施。
3. 第三段呼应段首论点，再次强调交通拥堵问题的严重性，呼吁全社会的高度重视。
参考范文
In recent years, traffic jam has become one of the growing concerns for the residents of most urban areas. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and even severely disturb our normal life. At the same time, it may exert negative impact on the environment. 1 How to relieve the headache? The following measures may be effective. 2
Firstly 3 , the government should adopt such policies as raising taxes on the purchase of private cars and allowing one family to buy at most one car, so as to limit the amount of private cars. Secondly 3 , construction of public transportation such as buses and subways should be accelerated so that citizens find it more convenient and faster to take public transport than driving cars. Meanwhile 3 , flexible working hours can be introduced, so that people can stagger the rush hours.
In a word, more than ever before, heavy traffic has become a source of headache for both the urban population and the city authorities. Serious as it is, traffic pressure can be alleviated sooner or later if the government can take the above effective measures and the public can pay more attention to their living environment. 4
近年来，交通拥堵已成为很多城市居民越来越担忧的问题之一。大城市的巨大交通压力可能给人们带来极大不便，甚至严重影响到我们的正常生活。同时，它也会对环境造成负面影响。如何缓解交通压力？如下措施或许奏效。
首先，政府应采取一些政策限制私家车的购买，比如增加购买私家车的税收，一个家庭只允许购买一辆私家车等。其次，还应加速诸如公共汽车和地铁等公共交通的建设，以使市民觉得乘坐公共交通出行比驾驶私家车出行更为方便和快捷。此外，可以采取灵活工作时间，这样人们就可以错开高峰期上下班。
总之，交通压力巨大已成为城市居民和政府越来越头疼的问题。尽管形势严峻，如果政府能采取以上有效措施，公众能更加关注自身的生存环境，交通压力迟早能得到缓解。
范文点评
1. 开篇描述提纲的内容，指出客观事实。
2. 自然过渡，引出缓解交通压力的举措，紧扣作文话题。
3. 分点论述，条理清晰，论证有力。
4. 末段总结全文，呼吁政府和公众共同应对交通压力问题。
要点用法
exert v. 施加，产生
relieve v. 缓解
accelerate v. 加速
flexible adj. 灵活的
stagger v. 错开
alleviate v. 减轻，缓和
句法点评
1. Firstly, the government should adopt such policies as raising taxes on the purchase of private cars and allowing one family to buy at most one car, so as to limit the amount of private cars.
这句话中使用了such...as...这个结构，表示“像……这样的”或“诸如……之类的”，as后可接名词、动名词或从句。
2. In a word, more than ever before, heavy traffic has become a source of headache for both the urban population and the city authorities.
in a word是表示总结的常用表达，意为“总之”；more than ever before意为“比以往任何时候更……”，用在此处表示强调。
关于压力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on pressure based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then explain how we can handle our pressure properly . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“压力”这一话题进行简述，并解释如何恰当地应对压力。
2. 漫画解读：图片上是一个人蒙上眼睛，衡量自己的压力大小，其实压力没有想象的那么大。只要恰当地处理，适当的压力也不一定是坏事情。
3. 文章立意：在这个高度竞争的社会，每个人都不可避免地承受着各种压力。其实，压力并不可怕，只要恰当地处理，适当的压力会变成前进的动力。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述图画内容，然后提出论点：压力不可避免，必须学会恰当处理。
2. 第二段提出三种恰当应对压力的方法：正确看待压力；找到适合自己的减压方法；学会适当放弃。
3. 第三段呼应文章论点，压力在所难免，要学会应对压力。
参考范文
As the picture above presents, a blindfolded man is trying to measure his pressure. 1 Self-deceptive though he may seem, yet people are actually open to various pressure from the hustle and bustle of modern life in this competitive society. 2 Appropriate pressure can motivate us to make progress, while too much pressure will have harmful effects on our life and work. Since we cannot avoid it, we must learn to handle it positively. 3
Firstly 4 , it is important to have a correct understanding of pressure. Pressure is like a double-edged sword. 5 The key is whether we hold the blade or the handle. We should make full use of it and avoid being hurt by it. Secondly 4 , find your own way of releasing pressure, such as listening to music, writing diaries, chatting with friends, etc. At last 4 , learn to “give up”. Usually the more people want, the more pressure they will get. So sometimes it is wise to learn to give something up.
To sum up, the pressure of life is inevitable, and thus we must learn to handle it effectively. We must have a right understanding of it, find our own way of reducing it and occasionally learn to give something up. 6
如上图所示，一个人蒙上眼睛试图衡量自己的压力大小。他可能看起来有点儿自欺欺人，其实在这个高度竞争的社会，人们不可避免地会受到来自喧嚣的现代生活的压力。适当的压力可以激励我们获取进步，而太多的压力则会有害于我们的生活和工作。既然我们不能避免压力，就必须学会积极地应对它。
首先，正确理解压力非常重要。压力就像一把双刃剑，关键看我们所持的是刀刃还是刀柄。我们应该充分利用压力，避免被划伤。其次，找到自己的减压方式，比如听音乐、写日记、找朋友聊天等。最后，学会“放弃”。通常，人们渴求的越多，压力就越大。因此，有时候学会放弃是明智的。
总而言之，生活中的压力是不可避免的，我们必须学会有效地处理它。我们必须对压力有正确的认识，找到自己的减压方式，学会偶尔放弃一些东西。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容。
2. 自然过渡，同时引出文章话题：压力不可避免。
3. 首段末句明确表达文章的主旨：必须学会积极地应对压力。
4. 分三个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。
5. 比喻论证，形象生动，同时也体现了论证方法的多样性。
6. 末段总结全文，重申观点，再次强调要学会恰当合理地应对压力。
要点用法
blindfolded adj. 被蒙住眼睛的
self-deceptive adj. 自欺欺人的
be open to 易受到
hustle and bustle 熙熙攘攘，忙忙碌碌
competitive adj. 竞争的，角逐的
appropriate adj. 适当的，恰当的
motivate v. 激发，使有动机
double-edged sword 双刃剑
release pressure 释放压力
blade n. 刃，锋
inevitable adj. 不可避免的
句法点评
1. Self-deceptive though he may seem, yet people are actually open to various pressure from the hustle and bustle of modern life in this competitive society.
倒装句使句式结构灵活多变，这句话改成正常的语序应该是Though he may seem self-deceptive...。
2. Usually the more people want, the more pressure they will get.
本句采用了“the more ... the more ...”的句型，使得语言简洁但逻辑性强，突出了人们的欲望和压力大小的关系。
成功需要付出努力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the importance of making efforts by commenting on Thomas Hardy’s remark, “I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据引语的内容就“成功需要付出努力”这一话题展开论述。
2. 文章立意：成功是人们经过不断的努力、艰辛的付出后所得到的回报。因此，成功只有靠不断的努力去获得。
写作思路
1. 第一段引入哈代的名言，简要解释后提出论点：成功需要付出努力。
2. 第二段用对比论证的方式阐述努力和不努力的两种后果，揭示只有努力才能取得成功。
3. 第三段具体阐述个人对努力的看法，再次强调成功需要付出努力。
参考范文
Thomas Hardy once said, “I might say that success is won by three things: first, effort; second, more effort; third, still more effort.” 1 It reveals that the only way to achieve success is to spare no effort. 2 I absolutely agree with it. 3
Everyone tries to achieve success. But some finally make it while others fail. 4 There is no doubt that those who stick to the end through a long period of hard struggles attain their aims while those who are not willing to make more industrious efforts stop halfway and thus cannot achieve success. 4
From my perspective, efforts mean hardwork with more perseverance. 5 Heaven rewards the diligent. We all know “no pains, no gains.” There is no royal road to the summit of success. Without exerting oneself, it is impossible to succeed. Making persistent efforts is like laying bricks one next to another. Only by working with whole-hearted devotion and perseverance can we attain success. Thus, hardwork with more perseverance is the deciding factor to one’s success. 5
托马斯•哈代曾经说过：“我会说成功要靠三件事才能赢得：努力，努力，再努力。” 它告诉我们成功的唯一方式就是全力以赴。我完全同意这一观点。
人人都试图获得成功。不过，一些人最后成功了，而一些人则失败了。毫无疑问，那些坚持自己梦想并经过长期努力奋斗撑到最后的人实现了他们的梦想，而那些不愿意勤奋努力的人只会半途而废，因此无法取得成功。
我认为，努力就是刻苦和更多的毅力。天道酬勤。我们都知道“没有付出就没有收获”。通向成功巅峰的路没有容易的。不努力是不可能成功的。持续的努力就像一块接一块地搭砖。只有全身心的努力和毅力，我们才能获得成功。因此，努力工作和更多的毅力是通向成功的决定性因素。
范文点评
1. 开篇引用引语，意在引出本文话题。
2. 揭示引语的寓意，即文章的中心思想：成功的唯一方式就是全力以赴。
3. 首段末句明确表明自己赞同上述观点。
4. 对比论证观点：努力的人才会成功，反之就会失败。
5. 给出个人对努力的理解并加以详细阐述。
要点用法
spare no effort 不遗余力
stick to 坚持
attain v. 实现；获得
industrious adj. 勤勉的
stop halfway 半途而废
summit n. 顶点
royal road 捷径；坦途
exerting oneself 努力；尽力
whole-hearted 全心全意的
deciding factor 决定性因素
句法点评
1. There is no doubt that those who stick to the end through a long period of hard struggles attain their aims while those who are not willing to make more industrious efforts stop halfway and thus cannot achieve success.
此处采用了固定句型：There is no doubt that...，意为“毫无疑问，……”，其中that引导同位语从句，后面的those who...while those who...是并列的对比结构，正反对比说明了努力付出和不愿付出的结果，其中who均引导定语从句。
2. Heaven rewards the diligent.
该句对应的中文是“天道酬勤”，平时应多注意中文成语的常见译法。
人生就像一盒巧克力
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to face a changeable life . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据给定的话语，就“生活变化无常”这一话题进行简述，并阐述如何应对变化无常的生活。
2. 文章立意：生活是不断变化的，存在着很多不确定的因素。但正是这种不确定的神秘感让人不断去探求生活的秘密。因此，我们要以正确的态度来应对多变的生活。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要阐述给定话语的含义。
2. 第二段论述虽然生活有不确定性，但这种挑战让人坚强。
3. 第三段论述如何以正确的态度应对多变的生活。
参考范文
“Life is like a box of chocolates. You never know what you are going to get.” That means we are never quite sure what will happen in the future of our life, or simply put, life is changeable. 1
Yes, life is changeable. 2 Gains and losses interchangeably coexist in life. Many successful people accept the fact that life is short and full of uncertainties. They also think the charm of life just lies in uncertainties. Maybe failures make us exhausted mentally and physically, but we bear the heavy burden and become stronger. 3
So what should we do to face a changeable life? 4 Flowers bloom and fade; life has ups and downs. We can’t control the world but we can control our attitude towards it. If we want to have no remorse during our lifetime, cherish the present day, and live in this moment. Don’t be so depressed when we’re at the lowest point in our life because there’s nowhere to go but up. The purpose of life is to live it, to taste and experience it to the utmost, to reach out eagerly and without fear for newer and richer experiences. 5
“人生就像一盒巧克力，你永远也不知道下一颗将是什么滋味。”这句话的意思是，我们永远不能完全确信未来会发生什么，或者简单地说，人生是变幻莫测的。
是的，人生变幻莫测。得与失在人生中是交互共存的。许多成功人士接受了人生短暂并且充满不确定性的事实。同时，他们认为人生的魅力恰恰在于那些不确定性。失败可能会使我们身心俱疲，但我们也会因此忍辱负重并且变得更强大。
因此，我们要怎样面对变幻莫测的人生？花开花谢，人生起伏。我们不可能掌控世界但我们可以掌控自己对世界的态度。如果我们不想在活着的时候留下遗憾，那么就珍惜今天，活在当下。当我们处在人生低谷的时候，不要太沮丧，因为无论朝哪个方向努力，都是向上的。生命的意义在于尽情生活，拼命品味和体验，勇往直前、无所畏惧地去追求更新、更丰富的人生经历。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述给定话语的含义。
2. 第二段首句自然过渡，引出生活的多变，紧扣作文话题。
3. 对比论证，论述生活虽多变但却让人在克服困难的过程中变得坚强。
4. 末段首句以疑问的句式提出如何应对多变的生活，自然过渡。
5. 论述以积极的态度应对生活。
要点用法
simply put 简单地说
interchangeably adv. 可交换地
coexist v. 共存；和平共处
uncertainty n. 不确定
exhausted adj. 疲惫的
mentally adv. 精神上
physically adv. 身体上
bloom v. 开花
fade v. 凋谢；褪色
remorse n. 懊悔
句法点评
1. Many successful people accept the fact that life is short and full of uncertainties.
此句用了that引导的同位语从句，从句解释fact 的具体内容。
2. Flowers bloom and fade; life has ups and downs.
采用形象的描写，使表达显得更加生动。
On Perseverance
毅力
Behind every great achievement in anyone's life lies perseverance. We seethis in everyhuman endeavour. Outstanding sportsmen spend all their timepractising. Their endurance isbeyond imagination. The same is true ofbusinessmen who build up for tunes. What we usuallysee are their achievements,but once we go behind the scenes we will find that they have put ina lot ofcontinual steady efforts. We all have read of great musicians, writers andinventorswho have created or discover ed br eakthroughs in human achievement.Invariably they havesaid that they owe all their success to perseverance. As tocollege students, quite a bignumber of them have become successful language learners through perseverance, however, acertain group of them just stop half wayand their previous efforts turn out to be fruitless.
Of all the countless examples the saga of Colonel Saunders is perhaps oneof the mostoutstanding. The 65-year-old man from Kentucky had a dream to start achain of fried chickenrestaur ants all over the world. To realize his dream, heknew that he needed a restaurant ownerto go into partnership with him to openthe first restaurant and to fry chicken according to thesecret recipe he had.Colonel Saunders had knocked on 1008 doors before he finally found hispartner.It is doubtful whether many of us would have had the perseverance to knock evenahundred doors.
From the above discussion we can draw a conclusion that success comes toanyone who keepsworking perseveringly and lack of perseverance can only resultin frustration and failure.
CET6结构分析：
·In every human endeavour lies perseverance
* Sportsmen practising all the time
* Businessmen putting in a lot of efforts
* Musicians, writers, inventors created break throughs
* College students learning a language
· Colonel Saunders and KFC
· Conclusion
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇议论文。文中就“ 毅力”这一话题展开讨论并发表自己的看法。第一段中第一句为主题句, 以下的论述均围绕这一主题展开,最后落实到学生学习一门语言必须有毅力才能成功。第二段中作者举了一个翔实的例子, 进一步论证毅力的重要性。最后一段结论是全文的归纳。全文用词得当,语言流畅。
CET6六级作文万能句型：
perseverance n . 毅力, 坚毅
human endeavour 人的努力
endurance n. 忍受力, 忍耐
beyond imagination 超出想像
The same is true of... ……也情况相同
go behind the scenes 去幕后
break throughs n. 突破, 惊人进展
invariably ad. 总是, 不变地
stop half way 半途而废
turn out to be fruitless 结果一事无成
saga n. 家世
Colonel Saunders 上校桑德斯
a chain of 连锁( 店)
go into par tners hip 合伙
sec ret recipe 秘方
fru st ra tion n. 挫败
My View on Campus Violence
1.近来不断有大学校园暴力事件发生
2.产生这些暴力事件的原因
3.我的看法
英语四级作文范文
My View on Campus Violence
It is shocking to notice that extreme violence has occurred with frequencyon campus in recent years.Several months ago，a university student hacked some ofhis classmates to death with a knife.Recently，a college student from aprestigious university stabbed a professor，who was preparing for his lecture，todeath.
These tragedies seem to be unimaginable when college students are regardedas the elite of the society.Some people claim that the higher education hasn’tattached due importance to moral education of the college students.Othersbelieve that college students are fragile in their internal minds.These opinionsdo make sense when we take the overloaded pressure imposed on college studentsinto consideration.
In my opinion，it is more important to take measures to avoid suchoccurrences.Psychological aid is a solution.Those criminals on the campus mayhave the experience of being humiliated or facing a lot of pressure. Onlythrough psychological consultation can they outlet their negative feelings andhence avoid extreme actions.
Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a compositionon the topic Is Good Appearance More Important than Capability?You should writeat least 150 words，and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below:
1)当前诸多美丽女孩子尽管没有很强能力仍能找到较好工作，因而某些人得出结论说外貌比能力更重要
2)你与否同意?给出你理由
Is Good Appearance More Important than Capability?
Old people often tell the young，“Don’t judge a person by hisappearance”，meaning capability is more important than appearance.However，nowadays，with more interviewers putting emphasis on looks and theappearance of the applicants，a lot of people come to the conclusion thatappearance is more important than capability.
As for me，I can’t agree with this argument. Good appearance is pleasant，butcapability is more important，because it demonstrates one’s self-cultivation andpractical values. It shows the efforts and the glory of acquiring somethingthrough one’s hard work whereas good looks bespeak no struggle of theindividual. Besides，maybe sometimes a beautiful face can help a girl acquire agood position，but in the long run it is her talent not her look that reallyworks in her career development.
Therefore，those without good appearance needn’t feel depressed becauseone’s success depends on his capability;those with good appearance have to workhard since good appearance cannot bring a person final success.
好的外表比能力更重要吗?
老人经常告诉年轻人，"不要以貌取人"，意思是能力比外表更重要。然而，如今，随着越来越多的面试官重视求职者的外表，很多人得出结论，外表比能力更重要。
就我而言，我不同意这种说法。好的外表是令人愉快的，但能力更重要，因为它显示了一个人的自我修养和实际价值。它显示了一个人通过努力而获得的荣耀，而好的外表却没有显示出个人的奋斗。此外，也许有时漂亮的脸蛋可以帮助一个女孩获得一个好职位，但从长远来看，真正对她的职业发展起作用的是她的才能而不是她的外表。
因此，没有好外貌的人不必感到沮丧，因为一个人的成功取决于他的能力;有好外貌的人必须努力工作，因为好外貌不能给一个人带来最终的成功。
My View on Campus Violence
1.近来不断有大学校园暴力事件发生
2.产生这些暴力事件的原因
3.我的看法
高分范文
My View on Campus Violence
It is shocking to notice that extreme violence has occurred with frequencyon campus in recent years.Several months ago，a university student hacked some ofhis classmates to death with a knife.Recently，a college student from aprestigious university stabbed a professor，who was preparing for his lecture，todeath.
These tragedies seem to be unimaginable when college students are regardedas the elite of the society.Some people claim that the higher education hasn’tattached due importance to moral education of the college students.Othersbelieve that college students are fragile in their internal minds.These opinionsdo make sense when we take the overloaded pressure imposed on college studentsinto consideration.
In my opinion，it is more important to take measures to avoid suchoccurrences.Psychological aid is a solution.Those criminals on the campus mayhave the experience of being humiliated or facing a lot of pressure. Onlythrough psychological consultation can they outlet their negative feelings andhence avoid extreme actions.