关于职业定位和目标
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Occupation Orientation and Career Goal . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines:
Senior undergraduates are facing career choices.
To figure out your occupation orientation and career goal contributes to your career development.
What should we do to develop a desirable career?
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据提纲的内容就“职业定位和目标”这一话题进行简述，并解释。
2. 文章立意：要想毕业时找到较为理想的工作，就必须充分认识到职业定位和目标规划的重要性。
写作思路
1. 第一段指出事实：大学生就业已成为一个难题。
2. 第二段阐述造成大学生就业难的原因：高校扩招，经济不景气，职业定位不准等。
3. 第三段阐述若想找到理想的工作，应在找工作前做好充分准备。
参考范文
Occupation Orientation and Career Goal
There is no doubt that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted. 1
There are various reasons for graduates’ being increasingly difficult to secure an ideal job. 2 For example, colleges and universities have enrolled so many students that the number of graduates is far greater than needed in the market. And the job vacancies are insufficient during the economic depression. Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, the most critical factor is that a large number of college students haven’t figured out right occupation orientation or career goal before they really enter the society. In reality, both occupation orientation and career goal are crucial to one’s career development. If one intends to find an ideal job, here are several recommendations.
Above all 3 , college students should seek their own orientation, analyze their personalities and find out their vocational interests, in order to know what jobs they are suitable for and capable of. Then full preparation should be made. Second 3 , job hunters need to make all-round analysis of the job market and professional situation, finding a proper place after considering social needs and personal interests. What’s more 3 , the graduates should set both long-term and short-term goals, making mature and rational choices according to different situations at different career development stages.
职业定位和目标
毫无疑问，找工作是大学生正面临的一个严肃问题。
大学毕业生找到一份理想工作越来越难，原因有很多。比如说，高校招收的学生太多，以至于毕业生的数量远远高于市场的需求。另外，在经济萧条期间，空缺职位往往不足。然而，在我看来，最关键的要素是很多大学生在真正进入社会之前没有找准正确的职业定位或设立正确的职业目标。事实上，职业定位和目标对于职业发展来说至关重要。若想要找到理想的工作，这里有几条建议可供参考。
首先，大学生在毕业前应找好自己的定位，分析自己的性格特征，找准职业兴趣，看自己适合做什么,能做什么，并为之做好充分的准备。其次，求职者应全方位分析职业行情和职场形式，在社会需求和个人兴趣之间寻找切合点。此外，毕业生要制定长期和短期目标，根据所处环境不同和职业发展阶段不同作出成熟理性的选择。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要说明客观事实：大学生找工作不易。
2. 自然过渡，引出大学生难找工作的原因。
3. 采用分点论证的方法，列举对职业定位和目标确定的建议和措施，恰如其分。
要点用法
secure v. 得到
vacancy n. 空缺
insufficient adj. 不充足的
orientation n. 定位，定向
in reality 事实上
vocational adj. 职业的
rational adj. 理性的
句法点评
1. There is no doubt that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted.
开篇首句使用了There is no doubt that...句型，这是六级作文中阐述现象时常使用的句式，意为“毫无疑问，……”，类似的表达方法还有There is no denying that...
2. If one intends to find an ideal job, here are several recommendations.
该句型是表达提出建议的常用句式。
大学生自主创业的利弊
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the advantages and disadvantages of college student self- employment based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“大学生创业”这一话题进行简述，并解释自主创业的优缺点。
2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一个写有“大学生创业”的巨大磁铁，吸引了大批刚从学校出来的毕业生。
3. 文章立意：受到大学生就业形势黯淡和政府对大学生自主创业政策支持的影响，很多大学生在毕业后选择自主创业。然而，任何事情都有两面性，自主创业固然有不少好处，也存在一些缺点。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述图画内容，提出大学生自主创业的原因。
2. 第二段分析大学生自主创业的优点和缺点，每个方面都是从社会和个人两个角度进行解析。
3. 第三段呼应文章论点，提出只要大学生不怕困难，仔细准备，创业还是值得一试的。
参考范文
As is revealed in the picture, self-employment is like a magnet, attracting a large number of newly graduated college students. 1 Considering the bleak employment situation and the government’s encouragement policies towards college students, it is no surprise that so many graduates choose self-employment instead of finding a job. 2
Self-employment can bring many benefits to the society as well as to the students themselves. 3 For the society, college students starting their own business can ease the pressure of employment. For the students, not only can they put what they learn at school into practice, but also have an opportunity to improve their innovation abilities by combining their theoretical knowledge with social practice. However, college student self-employment also has some disadvantages. 4 For one thing, due to the limitations of college students themselves, such as lack of experience, connections and well-considered plans, etc., it is not easy for them to be successful, thus causing waste of social resources. For another, once they fail in self-employment, they can easily feel depressed and have a breakdown.
In my opinion 5 , as long as the students realize the difficulties and make full preparation, it is worth trying to start their own business. After all, where there is a will, there is a way. 6
如图所示，自主创业就像一块磁铁，吸引着大批的大学应届毕业生。考虑到黯淡的就业形势和政府对大学生就业的鼓励政策，如此多的毕业生选择自主创业而不是就业就不足为奇了。
创业可以为社会和大学生个人带来不少好处。对于社会而言，大学生自主创业能够缓解社会就业压力。对于大学生个人而言，他们不仅可以把在学校学到的知识应用于实践，而且有机会通过将理论知识和社会实践结合起来提高自己的创新能力。然而，大学生创业也会有一些缺点。一方面，由于大学生自身的局限性，如缺乏经验、人脉和考虑周详的计划，他们很难取得成功，从而可能造成社会资源的浪费。另一方面，一旦他们创业失败，他们很容易心情沮丧，甚至精神崩溃。
在我看来，只要大学生意识到创业存在的困难并做好充分的准备，创业还是值得一试的。毕竟，有志者事竟成。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容，大学生创业极具吸引力。
2. 自然过渡，引出大批学生创业的原因。
3. 分两个角度论证创业的优点：对个人和社会均有利。
4. 分两个层次论证创业的缺点，论据充分，论证有力。
5. 末段发表个人看法，鼓励大学生在考虑周全的情况下可以尝试自主创业。
6. 引用谚语，使文章生动，同时增强了论证的说服力。
要点用法
magnet n. 磁铁，磁铁石
bleak adj. 黯淡的，无光的
ease v. 缓解，减轻
pressure n. 压力
innovation n. 创新，革新
depressed adj. 沮丧的，忧郁的
breakdown n. 崩溃
句法点评
1. As is revealed in the picture, self-employment is like a magnet, attracting a large number of newly graduated college students.
首句采用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，主句采用比喻的修辞手法，还包含现在分词attracting引导的成分作伴随状语。
2. For one thing, due to the limitations of college students themselves, such as lack of experience, connections and well-considered plans, etc., it is not easy for them to be successful, thus causing waste of social resources.
这句话中包含了现在分词causing引导的成分作结果状语。本句的主句为it形式主语句型。
毕业“啃老”现象
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should briefly describe the picture, explain its intended meaning and then show your opinion about NEET phenomenon . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“啃老”这一现象进行简述，并解释这一现象背后的原因及自己的看法。
2. 漫画解读：从图中可以看出，花白头发的年迈父母正在用一只巨大的奶瓶喂养已经大学毕业的儿子。儿子虽然大学毕业，却空有毕业证，没有工作，只靠父母养活度日。
3. 文章立意：“啃老”现象引起人们越来越多的关注。因此，文章由现象出发，探究其背后的原因并给出自己的看法。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述漫画，然后引出“啃老”这一现象并解释“啃老”的具体内涵。
2. 第二段通过解析论证的方式阐述“啃老”现象背后的原因。
3. 第三段给出自己对“啃老”的看法。
参考范文
We can see in the picture that the white-haired parents are feeding their adult son, who has graduated from college but refuses to work and depends on his parents to live. 1 Here, the adult son is a typical NEET. NEET is an abbreviation for Not in Employment, Education or Training, referring to the young people who are unemployed, not enrolled in school or engaged in housework, and not seeking work or the technical training needed for work but seeking security from parents. 2
In my opinion, there are two reasons behind the phenomenon. 3 For one thing 4 , with the development and popularity of higher education, the number of graduates is increasing each year and the graduates have to face great employment pressure. With the fierce competition in the job market, some of them cannot stand out and then stay at home, relying on their parents. For another 4 , some graduates are generally dissatisfied with the options and opportunities available to them.
In any case, I think there is no excuse for any young people to refuse to work and simply depend on their parents. 5 They should accept their social role as an adult in seeking full-time employment after graduation or further training.
我们可以从图中看到，白发苍苍的父母在给他们已成年的、大学毕业却拒绝工作的“啃老族”孩子喂奶。图中的孩子是一个典型的“啃老族”。“啃老族”是一个缩写词，表示不就业，不升学，不进修或参加就业辅导，指的是那些无业、不上学、不参与家务劳动、也不去找工作或者寻求工作所需的技术培训而只是赖在家里寻求家长庇护的年轻人。
在我看来，这个现象背后有两个原因。第一，随着高等教育的发展和普及，每年的毕业生数量都在增加，毕业生必须要面对巨大的就业压力。伴随着求职市场的激烈竞争，他们中的一些人无法脱颖而出而回家靠父母生活。第二，总体来说，一些毕业生对于现有的选择和机遇不太满意。
任何情况下，我都认为年轻人没有理由拒绝工作，纯粹依赖父母。他们应该接受自己成年人的社会角色，毕业后去寻找全职的工作或者深造。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容，同时准确传达出这幅漫画的寓意。
2. 自然过渡，引出“啃老”现象，紧扣作文话题。
3. 第二段首句点明要论述的现象背后的原因。
4. 分两个层次论述了原因，清晰简洁。
5. 末段首句明确表达自己的观点：年轻人不应该以任何借口“啃老”。
要点用法
abbreviation n. 缩写；缩写词
enroll v. 入学；登记，注册
for one thing 首先，一则
stand out 脱颖而出
for another 其次
be dissatisfied with 对……不满意
in any case 不管怎么说
句法点评
1. NEET is an abbreviation for Not in Employment, Education or Training, referring to the young people who are unemployed, not enrolled in school or engaged in housework, and not seeking work or the technical training needed for work but seeking security from parents.
这是一个很长的复杂句，包含了现在分词短语referring to the young people，定语从句who are unemployed, not enrolled...or the technical training以及过去分词短语needed for work，句式变化多样。
2. For another, some graduates are generally dissatisfied with the options and opportunities available to them.
本句中采用了be dissatisfied with这一短语，意为“对……不满意”；available to表示“对……来说是可以获得的”。
The Decline of Small Businesses
小企业的劣势
Duringthe recent years, countless small busines ses have closed their doorsand gonebankrupt. The corne r grocer's , the small dress shop, thebeauty salon, all are victims ofmarket competition. Most of them arereplaced by other small businesses that temporarilyfill the needs of theneighbourhood but frequently end up, sharing the same fateofdissolution. More often, the market served by small businesses istaken over by large storesand shops. Businesses like the cornergroceries and the dress shops have gone to bigdepartment stores andsupermarkets, which not only keep adequate store and variety, butalsoprovide better environment and service.
Apparently, it is increasingly difficult for small businesses to succeed inthe present complexeconomic structure based, as it is, on small profitmargins and tremendou s sales volume. Lackof enough fund and poormanagement may be the chief cause of this tragedy. In addition,thequality of their commodities often causes suspicion of the customersas many smallbusinesses are found to sell fake products for more profit,thus earning themselves an evilreputation. As to shopping environmentand convenient service, they are unmentionable. All of the above speedup their bankruptcy.
Today, withthe establishment of more and more groups and big corporations, howsmallbusinesses can survive in the tide of the market competitiveeconomy has become a hotsocial issue.
CET6结构分析：
· Small businesses gone bankrupt
· Cause 1 — difficult to run on the basis of small profit margins and tremendous volume
· Cause 2 — short of fund
· Cause 3 — evil reputation
· Cause 4 — undesirable environment and service
· How to survive is questionable
CET6六级作文内容分析：
本文是一篇议论文, 涉及一社会热门话题, 文中内容贴近现实, 读来使人感到“这些事似乎都发生在我们周围”。此外, 全文文笔非常流畅, 是一篇很好的短文。
CET6六级作文万能句型：
go bankrupt 破产
beauty salon 美容院
corne r grocer's 小街杂货店
ma rket competiton 市场竞争
s har e the same fate 遭遇相同命运
be taken ove r by... 由……取代
small profit margins and tremendous volume 薄利多销
cau se suspicion 引起怀疑
speed up 加速
groups and big corporations 集团和大公司
survive in the tide of market competitive economy 在市场竞争经济大潮中幸存
hot social issue 社会热点
Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to writea compositionon the topic College Students’ Starting Their Own Undertakings. You should writeat least 150 words，and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese)below:
1)当前有不少大学生毕业后开始自主创业，政府勉励这种行为，并且还给大学生创业提供了许多优惠和便利办法
2)产生这一现象因素
3)你的看法
College Students’ Starting
Their Own UndertakingsNowadays there are many college students who chooseto start their own undertakings instead of finding a job after graduation. Thegovernment encourages this practice，and provides many preferential policies andfacilitation measures for college students. This phenomenon has aroused greatconcern from the whole society.
However，why do so many college students take the way of starting their ownundertakings?Firstly，college students are facing severe employment situations.Many college graduates couldn’t find ideal jobs，which forces them to set uptheir own businesses. Moreover，some ambitious college students are not satisfiedwith being employed by others. They want to develop and prove their talents byrunning their own businesses. Besides，the government’s encouragement and themedia’s reports on college students venture stars have stimulated more collegestudents’ enthusiasm to take this way.
As for me，it is a good choice for college students to start their ownundertakings. However，it is a very difficult cause，which needs firmdetermination，clear mind，ability to endure hardship and a feasible project.Therefore，think it over and make full preparation before you decide to startyour own business.
大学生创业
现在有很多大学生在毕业后选择自己创业，而不是找工作。政府鼓励这种做法，并为大学生提供许多优惠政策和便利措施。这种现象已经引起了全社会的高度关注。
然而，为什么这么多的大学生会采取自主创业的方式呢?许多大学毕业生找不到理想的工作，这就迫使他们自己创业。此外，一些有抱负的大学生并不满足于受雇于他人。他们希望通过经营自己的企业来发展和证明自己的才能。另外，政府的鼓励和媒体对大学生创业明星的报道也激发了更多大学生走这条路的热情。
在我看来，大学生创业是一个不错的选择。但是，这是一项非常艰巨的事业，需要坚定的决心、清醒的头脑、吃苦耐劳的精神和可行的项目。因此，在决定自己创业之前，一定要考虑清楚，做好充分的准备。
Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a compositionon the topic How to improve the graduates’ mental health. Your essayshould startwith a brief description of the picture.You should write at least 150 words butno morethan 200 words.
参考范文：
How to improve the graduates’ mental health
Graduates’ mental health has been playing anincreasingly important role inthe daily life. Actually, itis widely accepted that it has gainedgrowingpopularity among persons in all walks of life.However, in the season ofgraduation, it’s reportedsome cases of self-killing or mental disorderstillhappened.
Obviously, graduates face various kinds of pressure. When graduatesconfront with greatpressure, the best method is to communicate with friends orfamily members to unburdenthe feelings. And the universities and colleges shouldalso pay more attention to graduates’mental health and take effective actionsuch as providing psychological service for studentshelping them to deal withmental problems. From the perspective of parents, they should caremore abouttheir kids’ mental health, too. Though the parents cannot write thedissertationfor the graduates, nor can they find a job, they can communicatewith their kids and helpthem to figure out the reasons for the difficulties.
From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that wecan freeourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. Forexample, if you have pains orpuzzles in mind, finding a friend to express is agood way to release pressure. Certainly, thereis no doubt that further attentionwill be paid to this issue.
The Decline of Small Businesses
小企业的劣势
During the recent years, countless small busines ses have closed their doors and gonebankrupt. The corne r grocer's , the small dress shop, the beauty salon, all are victims ofmarket competition. Most of them are replaced by other small businesses that temporarilyfill the needs of the neighbourhood but frequently end up, sharing the same fate ofdissolution. More often, the market served by small businesses is taken over by large storesand shops. Businesses like the corner groceries and the dress shops have gone to bigdepartment stores and supermarkets, which not only keep adequate store and variety, butalso provide better environment and service.
Appar ently, it is increasingly difficult for small businesses to succeed in the present complexeconomic structure based, as it is, on small profit margins and tremendou s sales volume. Lackof enough fund and poor management may be the chief cause of this tragedy. In addition, thequality of their commodities often causes suspicion of the customers as many smallbusinesses are found to sell fake products for more profit, thus earning themselves an evilreputation. As to shopping environment and convenient service, they are unmentionable. All of the above speed up their bankruptcy.
Today, with the establishment of more and more groups and big corporations, how smallbusinesses can survive in the tide of the market competitive economy has become a hotsocial issue.
seeding employment in u.k.
英国就业率
As can be seen clearly from the graph, the difference in the numbers of people working in thethree major employment sectors in the u.k. economy in the early 1980s was relatively small, with about 4 million workers in engineering, 5 million in agriculture and 5.5 million in theservice industries.
However, the period 1980-1990 saw significant changes in the relative sizes of these threeemployment sectors. there was a rapid decline in employment in agriculture, with the numberof workers dropping by more than 80%. On the other, employment oppor tunities in the serviceindustries increased sharply, especially after 1986, whereas the engineering sectorexperienced a gradual but constant decline.
Trends in the above graph clearly indicate that the service industries will continue to employthe largest number of people at least for the next few years, while the engineering sector willneed somewhat fewer workers in the next decade. On the whole, the total number ofemployment offered in these three sectors was much smaller than ten years before and theredoesn't seem to be any likelihood for improvement in the near future. So, students who aregoing to graduate soon may need to prepare to seek employment elsewhere.